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Some Say I Dream Too Much

Some say I dream too much-- focusing on far too simple things: like water lilies and raindrop-rings-- spiders in tucks strumming silk strings; stars slipping across seas of downy night; while others waste their sleeping, steadfast, I close my eyes trimming sails for deeper light....

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Date: 8/14/2016 4:30:00 AM
Great poem I like your style x wendy x
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/14/2016 5:38:00 AM
Hi Wendy; thank you. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 8/13/2016 10:48:00 PM
I like this, Joe! I don't think you can dream too much. A lot of people now a days don't dream enough. Blessings!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/14/2016 5:41:00 AM
They don't know how. Dreams require faith beyond recognized physical substance--and blessings to you! Another of the Faithful obviously!!
Date: 8/13/2016 3:22:00 PM
This is excellent poetry, Joe. I really enjoyed reading this one. I agree, "I close my eyes trimming sails for a deeper light" Superb!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/13/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel; happy birthday my friend! Oh to be a youthful 60 again:) Blessings on this special!

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