Some Say

Some say
when one dies 
there is nothing

no more seen and felt

nothing left behind
gone all the
memory
travel
fits of dreams

inspiring beams
one has chased 
through imagined dimensions
if not to capture
at least, then, to experience
and chronicle

poems transcribe a soul’s 
patterns of ascent and falls 

as a crystal gazed to read
the electrics enclosed alive,
conduits of senses that
spark and fly seeming into
an alternate freedom beckoning -- 

Everywhere I look
I see no example of nothing -- 
to the contrary, see
the little becoming the large
the solid becoming the mist
yet breathable, so to speak
replenishing,
(transformed into)
(reformed of)
accountable deaths becoming new 
resurrections – even space
and time with forward
and back markers, nothing
lost entirely just replaced -- 
juxtaposed….

If I will then be nothing

show me one example! 

Perhaps I will believe….

Even the vacuum

speaks the substance

of emptiness....writes its hidden
language

upon our blank pages....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 9:03 PM
Deeply philosophical... nothing is destroyed, everything is either transformed or reformed. Nothing is lost but only replaced. Believe, you'll never end up as nothing, but will be resurrected as a new being. Very profound thoughts.
DiMino Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 4:38 AM
Seems quite obvious to me. Thank you, Valsa; your supporting comments made my day. Blessings.
Wolf Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 7:11 PM
I think that you actually gave yourself a great deal of hope with your last few lines there... I really don't know what to say about 'what comes next.' Can't seem to find anyone who can talk from experience about it. :) gw
DiMino Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 8:20 PM
A mystic communicates with many unseen dimensions...so, to some it is not such an alien concept or practice. Have witnessed spiritual healing. A lot we do not know. Cannot even begin to understand logically.
Maverick Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 1:24 PM
Only No-Thing lasts for-ever dear Joe Dimino...I find at this juncture i can only ( add no'-Thing ) also..? Which is an oxymoronical statement to say the least.' I hope you can grasp the gravity inherent In this appraisal.? Dear brother.) As Gathering nothing together, may be one of the worlds hardest of feats.? Anyway I leave it in your court as they say, let me Know once you have it sighted.? And take a photo.' At least.!!!
Maverick Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 3:42 PM
I can add nothing to that.' And at least the plus sign will be seen.) You'll have to trust me on the rest.' Lol)))
DiMino Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 3:00 PM
I've tried, Joe; never been able to take a photo of nothing -- even darkness or overexposed light is something...maybe to further prove my point.
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