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Example for my contest :)

Some People Without A Brain Do An Awful Lot Of Thinking

The Scarecrow, he was born without a brain 
And the Tinman got all rusted from the rain 
Because the Tinman had no heart 
And because the Scarecrow was smart 
Instead of walking to Oz, he'd taken a train
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Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 12:04 AM
Without a brain, to take a train! Hard to explain. ~ Keep smiling, CM.
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:21 PM
The Tinman found something to read/ then the Scarecrow followed his lead/ on the way, they grew/ what they felt and knew/ now for the Wizard -- there's no need!
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Ha! :-D Kewl. Replying above with the continuing story... ;)
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Good one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 8:31 PM
'Think and Do,' my workbook series in First Grade. Remember that series, CM? Well, it's now been replaced by Kiddies' Happy Hour -- 'Think and Drink.' So Bear Juan
Daniel Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 10:09 PM
Clever example, Charlie:)
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Thank you, Joanna :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 9:23 PM
A cute example. That new movie is coming out soon too! I bet you want to see it.
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Thank you, Andrea. You are right...can't wait to see it :)
George Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Such a fun write, dear Charlie. Gave a good smile this morning
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Good morning, Valsa! Glad it gave you a smile :) Thank you!
Ashley Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 6:13 PM
Dear Charlie, your clever pen shines! Love the last line twist, made me smile :) Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:48 AM
Aww...if I can make a smile then I've done a good deed. I guess I'm just a good deed doer (He he). Thank you so much, Susan. Warmest wishes dear friend and poetess :)
M  Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 3:11 PM
Cute and clever Charlie! Debx
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:48 AM
Thank you so much, Deb :)
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 11:46 AM
- Well written :))) - hugs
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:49 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise :))) - hugs backatcha!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 11:43 AM
What a fun/cute write. Have a fun day writing away.............
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:51 AM
Thank you very much, Paula. You too...write away dear friend. :)
Tor Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 10:39 AM
lol Charlie thanks for the laugh my friend. Enjoy your Monday. Thanks for posting...
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:52 AM
Thanks for stopping by again, Michael. Glad I gave you an early week laugh :) Be well...
Woods Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 9:02 AM
Good one! Very clever! Xo
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:53 AM
Aww...thank you so much, Crystol :) xo
Rolland Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 7:34 AM
very creative, it is so good to smile have a nice day poet
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Thank you so much, Yann. Have a nice day...Smile on! :)
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