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"some Bible Truths" "better Metaphorically Said"

Free Verse Rhyme Things that are Biblically said, and metaphorically read.. By a natural mind...not fed..needs Sacred Heart’s review... To bring the mind into it’s renew..fret not...don’t strew.. Leaves sometimes a mystery....in you...for God loves you.. Truths that feed the mind sometimes, are symbolically said Submerged in a mystery to saves the mind some dread.. Of the depth of something said, prophesy eventually fed.. At a different age instead, time to understand it’s dread.. For it is at this day and time..time to realign..the mind.. There is a mystery we now must say..giving human life fair play.. For this truth doth spay....minds lies each day.. Unknown to some minds..Love truth is kind.. For Love’s logic...from the heart...would be for all...a good start.. Now all this just so you’ll know.... bible truths.. Doth already sow...some things the mind doesn’t know.. By metaphorical sow...to heaven we go... As a body hath many members..as love resembles.. So are we one body...by one...love is mighty.. May we not bite and devour...Love is like one car.. We shall not be consumed...we are all of one loom!! 11-27-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/30/2009 4:56:00 PM

We are all ONE body in Christ Moses and you have stated His Truth in this magnificent write! Profound and prolific! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Also many thanks for your encouraging words...all is very much appreciated! God Bless! Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary

Douglas Ace

Date: 12/11/2009 7:30:00 PM

Very appropriately put, Moses. I like the intention of this piece as it seems to me that in the midst of the complexities of this piece, the simple, undeniable truth emerges toward the end. Well done and thank you for all your kind comments on my poetry. Lightwalker

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2009 9:23:00 AM

U are blessed Moses and I am happy u are being extra blessed reading my poetry today... the message is timeless and free.. how many things can compare to that?? thankxxx for your most inspiring comments... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" and His Messenger....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2009 12:44:00 PM

Thankxxx Moses for your wonderful and spiritual comments on my poetry today and always... I always start my day out reading your poetry to get my spirit going.. have some new postings later tonight... blessings ... luv... "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/30/2009 9:28:00 AM

I read all these beautiful verses,You can transmit the message that God Loves Us so easy,you are an instrument played by God's own hands i beleive and its great to have you here--Charma

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/29/2009 11:26:00 AM

Please read my poem Today is the Day,I have a few insperational one's but noone is reading them.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2009 8:33:00 AM

Moses, regarding Caroline's post about comment to Poetry Soup Management.. read James Fraser Undesirable and see his blog also about this serious problem affecting all of us poets... vulgar and inappropriate writings have been posted by a new individual Hostile Pig Grandfather with abusive language and subject matter involving children and the unthinkable sin.. luv ... "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand

Date: 11/29/2009 1:12:00 AM

Best wishes with your writing John.Have a good day.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words today

Marty Owens

Date: 11/28/2009 5:36:00 PM

Truths from the bible are wonderful truths...Love it...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2009 1:03:00 PM

Interesting thoughts put to pen in these lines. Love is the key for really there are only two emotions love and fear and perfect love casteth out all fear. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/28/2009 11:44:00 AM

Moses, We are all of one loom...God's loom where he wove strings of genes to make all creatures and man. Teaching God's truths through poetry can be so fulfilling on both ends of the continuum. (writer and reader) Excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2009 10:42:00 AM

We all ARE in ONE LOOM... so beautifully written, Moses, such brilliant words and verses and the message ... irresistible...I hope many read it today... blessings ... luv.... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetie"