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That's enough, sadness poems - be gone! (But we really really want to drone on...) It's getting tiredsome, the vibe's getting dull (I suppose it is samey, we have entered a lull) You're serving no purpose, just driving me mad (Erm it's actually you filling the note pad) Shut up, what's needed is a change of tune (You get that from morning to afternoon) I don't need a poem to answer me back (Isn't that the point? I'm a 'true feelings' hack...) But I want a switch from fed up to fancy free (That's up to you, nothing to do with me) Don't you have answers and magic suggestions? (Maybe, try me with a few more questions) Why am I stuck in this ridiculous cycle? (I think you've just got a 'Moaniest Ever' title...) That's the least helpful thing I've ever heard! (You're talking to yourself, you're being absurd) Surely you have something nice to say? (That's not how you work, you make yourself pay) Pay for what exactly? (I don't know, not being 'satisfactory'?) It's stupid, I'm ok - sometimes better than that (You know as well as I do, we have a format) What's that, saying I'm all the bad things? (Now you're just tugging at my heartstrings...) Shut up head, you're the worst! (Well actually, this is the first time we've properly conversed) Are you saying I can negotiate a better deal (I'm probably a starting point if you want to heal) But what about your very mean streak? (We can work on giving that a tweak) Do you have answers to all I ask? (Obviously, give me literally any problem solving task!) Why don't I ever listen to my own advice? (I don't know, you love a bit of self sacrifice) There's a Black Forest Gateau downstairs, did you know? (Stop writing this rubbish, get down there - go!)

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Date: 8/9/2023 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Not rubbish a very cute/fun read. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/9/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Paula - I appreciate your feedback x

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