Solo Non-Stop

The shuddering waves hasten the night
the fullness of the moon hides behind copious clouds,
soon a roar becomes overwhelming amidst the storm
as the lashing rain solidifies upon the creaking bow.

freezing salty air
the siren of the whale’s call
enhance his struggles

It was then, as if a giant hand sweeps away the tempest
when tossed with in its heart, the tigerish rouge is subdued,
the lone sailor cries out in prayer as his trembling fingers
wipe away the remnants from his Bohemian brow.

paper thin egg shell
stained ribbons of wooded ply
wax candle aglow

His prayer was answered suddenly the clouds part
and the prominence of starlight shine through,
with his compass lost and guiding system kaput
he plots his way; sails the furrows of the celestial plough.

tears of gratitude
aid the swelling ocean waves
red sky a warning

 Entered Sailing Poetry Contest
Sponsor Julia Ward
Written 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Legros Kelley Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 1:00 AM
Beautiful and powerful This seems like it should be among the classic greats. I am going to add it to my favorites. I cannot wait to share this with my seventeen year old son. He loves the adventures of the sea.
George   Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:30 AM
I agree with Susan in every way. Many congrat's on your win with this magnificent Haibun, dear Harry. ~ Elaine
Kauffman Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Storm, hope and warning all highlighted in your wonderful write, Harry! Congratulations on this marvelous haibun and your win!
Ashley Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 4:26 PM
Dear Harry, the power of your pen creates a tempest of intensity. Your vivid imagery is robust yet emotions are expressed with delicate artistry.. a brilliant piece, my wonderful friend. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Somadas Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win Harry.. Great write..
Tor Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Harry loved how you put him in danger give him hope, then bring him back to face the sea again for what is coming. That twist at the end was quite the surprise...
Proxenos Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Harry I felt what you wrote, the fear of the sailor, the sky clearing - amazingly creative and intense imagery - but 'red sky a warning' sounds like danger. Beautiful poetry Harry. Thank-you. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Oh to be a sailor. One is truly in the lap of the Gods, yet salt water seems to be in their veins and the challenge of the sea is accepted. Another fine verse Harry - Lindsay
Ball Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Oh Well Done Harry. Loved this. Wonderful imagery. God Bless, JB
Leffanta Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 2:10 PM
A visual treat! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:01 PM
wow what incredible imagery Harry we have had stormy seas the last 2 days and the ferry hasn't sailed, excellent haibun, i do enjoy reading and writing this form:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 5:00 AM
Wow. This is amazing Harry. I felt like I was right there through this, reading it. Well written! I hope you have a nice day :)
Sharp Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Vivid imagery, and a story that crackles with energy. You certainly are a master of haibun, Harry.
Faulkner Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 9:08 PM
Quite a tempest-tossed tale, harry, I like the hope of starlight shining through - then an ominous touch at the end, intriguing...
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