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Wasted sunsets, when the sun comes down she will not find me there solo as the moon steady as an ocean stone, I arrive there solo, solo* Plucking at the strings of my guitar I say Hello, is anyone out there ? (Yelling) Behind the door Angel, look, ... I'm behind the door, please see me (pause) too many wasted sunsets too many lonely roads I go there crossing chasms of the heart she whispers to me, " Heh you, perfect stranger, follow me " solo, up I go * Hello, (I think I speak ) Angel, where are you ? then the sky turns deep purple, and I'm in for keeps solo, as a loon, while Ian, sleeps.

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Date: 2/27/2024 4:07:00 PM
creative and brilliantly written lyrical poem, dearest Rose. I agree with Yann. It's delicious! Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 2/27/2024 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Sara, I feel the love,
Date: 2/27/2024 3:36:00 PM
this is so creative and wonderful, you can write any style in poetry, this is a gift, thanks for sharing delicious poem Rose
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Date: 2/27/2024 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, most gracious you are *
Date: 2/27/2024 1:42:00 PM
Creative lyrics. Must be a contest going because I have seen several lyrical poems. If for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/27/2024 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for reading Sara, yes it is for a contest,

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