Solitary Rose

The field was strewn with lads clad in Blue and Gray.
Some entwined in death's macabre embrace on that fateful day.
Infantry clashed and cavalry dashed in a struggle to the death.
Boys were heard to gasp, "Mother, I love you!" with their final breath.

The hills echoed with the steady fusillade of the musket's rattle,
As brave men marched forward shoulder to shoulder into battle.
Sun gleamed off polished steel at the front and on the flank;
Yank and Reb in mortal combat, rank assaulting rank!

Cannon belched roaring flame, hurling shot all thro' the lines,
Ravaging men and nature with their destructive mines.
The men in Gray screamed their terrifying "Rebel Yell!"
The men in Blue kept their eyes on "Old Glory" even as they fell!

Barely visible thro' the billowing smoke on that field of little hope,
Grew a solitary rose in a thicket on a nearby grassy slope.
It stood sentry o'er the strife, displaying its brilliant hue,
And seemed to beckon and say, "Peace I offer you!"

A soldier boy broke ranks to fetch the rose in a moment of despair.
He clasped it to his breast and proffered a hurried prayer.
Alas, the gallant lad was soon to meet his fate on that field of gloom.
Buried in a shallow grave, lifeless hands still clutched the bloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 24, 2013 at 11:11 AM
Hello Bob... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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November 22, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Bob:-), Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT
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November 19, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Man and nature - one beautiful, the other gone insane. Always enjoy, Sarge. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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June 29, 2010 at 9:50 PM
I don't think I ever caught this one. It's just wonderful. LUv, Andrea
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June 25, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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June 20, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Congrats Bob-wonderful entry!~Tirzah~
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June 19, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Congrats Bob on your big win in the Blue Rose contest ..a glorious write .. a big day of wins for my dear friend..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 19, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Great poem Robert. We all seem to have had the same theme in a way. Congratualtions. Lvoe, Joyce
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June 19, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Another awesome write!!! Congratulations Robert. You have a wonderful flair! Love Jeralynn
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June 19, 2010 at 6:36 PM
Hey Robert, great job man 4th place with your Blue Rose. I appreciate the effort you put into writing and thank you for sharing.
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January 13, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Couldn't help but think of the song "Mama, Look Sharp" from 1776 when I read the line about the boys calling for their mothers. That was quite a chilling ending to this compelling poem, Robert, reaching out to clutch a rose that seemed to say, "Peace I offer you!" Isn't it ironic that some of our most ardent peace advocates are former military members? You rock! Love, Carolyn
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