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More brave soldiers died today Did they die in vain? Do you care? Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Quinzaine" Contest -July 2011

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Date: 7/18/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your win in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "Quinzaine" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 12:11:00 PM
Great idea Bob, worthy of your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/16/2011 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your worthy win!
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:34:00 AM
This is awesome Bob, a well deserved 1st place win.. Congratulations to you ;) Hope your weekend is an awesome one!!
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:21:00 AM
This kind of writing is what makes poetry invaluable. Keeping our soldiers' plight alive in the minds of people who take our freedom for granted by asking these most pertinent questions is subject matter that should be required reading leading to discussion matter in talk shows and documertaries. Looking at what the political leaders are leading our country into with such desregard for the constitution begs your two questions to be answered, Thank you for sharing this Bob. and Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:06:00 PM
Another big win for you Robert. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/15/2011 7:49:00 PM
congratulations, a most worthy one to win!
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:35:00 PM
well deserved congrats and first place Bob for a more than excellent poem my friend..one that touches all of us deeply especially those who have children or other relatives serving in military luv.. bravo .. my new favorite luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:31:00 PM
A story as old as time - unfortunately. Sometimes, in history, more relavent than at other times, but oft repeated. Something we should never forget to remind ourselves about. It is up to each of us to care and make sure it was not in vain. Nice job. Joe
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:25:00 PM
a very powerful write! congratulations on your 1st place win! those poor soldiers and their families...
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:07:00 PM
so few words to speak such volumes Thank you, Michael H.
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:41:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Bob, the Serge. Salute
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:05:00 AM
Touching Write Robert...good questions asked.
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Date: 7/13/2011 12:15:00 AM
Yes we care mate, bout your guys n ours ! great verse bungy mate, (good) on ya, keep pumping em out, Don
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:11:00 PM
Good question. It's so easy for people to forget about them when they have no one over there. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:28:00 PM
Well, for some years, as in ten, I have delt with this issue; having my son serve in Afganastan and Kuwait now. I'm one who does care sir ! Touching write dear poet ! Have a blessed week....much love, james
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:28:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Bob and wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:08:00 AM
This is sad because sadly, I rarely stop and think about these things, and there they are, out there fighting, the poor guys.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:24:00 PM
again a magnificent thought provoking set of lines Bob... truth .. staring at us right in the face .. good luck in the contest luv... a sure fire winner ..luv..
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:20:00 PM
Great entry Robert. Should be a winner. Mine you just commented on was written for the favorite quotes contest. Thanks. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:27:00 PM
Good work Mr Bob..I smell winner...BG
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Date: 7/11/2011 5:49:00 PM
awesome entry for the contest, I am sure it will place well
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