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Softness At Sunset

^.^ head sleeping on lap paws in Chinese softness held breaths soft as whispers Haiku Line 1 5 Syllables Line 2 7 Syllables Line 3 5 Syllables August 21, 2019

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Date: 8/24/2019 5:06:00 PM
Mmmm... this is truly gorgeous Panagiota! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/24/2019 5:47:00 PM
Blees you Ann, Panagiota xxoo
Date: 8/23/2019 2:20:00 AM
ah, so beautifully done, my friend. Bravo!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/23/2019 2:38:00 AM
A wonderful compliment, my Friend. I like the Haiku on elopement even more,))) PR
Date: 8/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
Gershon! I am humbled to be in your Faves..truly I am reliving the Haiku right now. Coffee plus cat....add Samba music by Antonio Carlos Jobim. French coffee, I am in seventh heaven,and a FAV to boot. Thank you. Panagiota
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Date: 8/21/2019 8:34:00 PM
This is an AMAZING haiku, Panagiota. The last line seals it so beautifully... Straight into my FAVES! Best always, Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2019 7:55:00 AM
Oy! See above box for my reply,,,so very sorry PR
Date: 8/21/2019 3:14:00 PM
very beautiful one!
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Date: 8/21/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thanks..that calico?on an embroidered Satin jacket? Too beautiful for words. Mind blowing Appreciate your visit and words... Panagiota xx
Date: 8/21/2019 2:43:00 PM
Hello Panagiota Romios, I can just picture this cat on your lap. I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/22/2019 9:45:00 AM
Yes Panagiots,it is a good poem. I think it is cute. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2019 3:00:00 PM
And a good day be yours, Darlene De Beaulieu! It's a good poem then, if you can picture it. That males me very happy, Darlene. May this day be very special to you. Panagiota Romios -))
Date: 8/21/2019 12:35:00 PM
- A lovely haiku, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2019 12:45:00 PM
Welcome. Anne Lise! I am so glad you liked. Oh, I wish I had an image to add. But I think you got the picture. I really feel better with no image. I want my words (the poem) to carry it. Panagiota xx
Date: 8/21/2019 10:42:00 AM
Sounds like someone's found a comfort spot. Tom.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2019 12:11:00 PM
Tom, I redid the Haiku with the word I wanted. Since you first saw it! Thank, Panagiota
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2019 10:49:00 AM
Yes. It really feels yummy and with it, comes such unspeakable serenity! Thank you, Tom. Panagiota Romios

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