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Soft Tears Upon My Pillow

In tattered pictures lie solitude Where broken fragments have no sound Could I dance in dreams of yesterday And believe your presence abound Awake through the long night, soft tears upon my pillow...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2012 6:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and I think this poem is one of your best ^Rick. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 2:03:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem, poignant and beautiful...and thanks for your inspiring comments on my kimo :)
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:14:00 PM
This is impressive Rick! Congrats. to you!
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Date: 12/13/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Kim
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Date: 12/13/2011 4:43:00 AM
Super to see this one on the winner's list Rick!! Congratulations, blessings Wilma
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Date: 12/13/2011 1:47:00 AM
Sad! well done Rick congratulations x
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:34:00 PM
Nicely done, and nicely won, Rick. You pain a picture of heartbreak!
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:03:00 PM
two old softies lovely romantic write Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2011 2:53:00 PM
Rick congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 12/12/2011 12:53:00 PM
So touching, Rick. I think I spend too much time dancing "in dreams of yesterday" and often when I wake, the tears come. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/12/2011 12:54:00 PM
By the way, congratulations on your win!!
Date: 12/12/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:51:00 AM
WOW!!! I can totally picture this Rick, I love how you say so much with words that represent silence.. Hope that makes sense.. lol.. This is a beauty.. God bless ;) Wilma
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:20:00 AM
I can only imagine the message you give here but the touch of sadness and feelings of being lost touch me greatly.
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