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Soft Shoulders

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      This is one junket which I
              could not miss

      The gentle were preening 
                themselves
          basking in the sun
     and our hearts like thunder
           each had its own 
                   pound
     as soft shoulders reflected
             that warm sun

That whirling unsteady sensation
    caused our mans attention

      Their giggle was quick
                   silly
            and nervous
      and their gentle eyes
           from our likes

             swayed not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/8/2012 9:46:00 AM
Mmmmm, delicious!
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Date: 11/17/2009 3:38:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2009 6:02:00 PM
Lovely, and sensual. A tender poem of love. ~Nicely done!~Carrie
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:48:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Made my heart smile. Enjoyed, thanks for sharing. Keep writing! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:24:00 AM
It seems you enjoyed your dessert James:)you made me smile in this poem,such sweetness in this poem and gentleness,to those Soft Creamed Shoulders--sweet poem indeed,so nice to be reading you again,talented indeed--Charma
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