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Soft Shoulders

. This is one junket which I could not miss The gentle were preening themselves basking in the sun and our hearts like thunder each had its own pound as soft shoulders reflected that warm sun That whirling unsteady sensation caused our mans attention Their giggle was quick silly and nervous and their gentle eyes from our likes swayed not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/8/2012 9:46:00 AM
Mmmmm, delicious!
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Date: 11/17/2009 3:38:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2009 6:02:00 PM
Lovely, and sensual. A tender poem of love. ~Nicely done!~Carrie
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:48:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Made my heart smile. Enjoyed, thanks for sharing. Keep writing! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:24:00 AM
It seems you enjoyed your dessert James:)you made me smile in this poem,such sweetness in this poem and gentleness,to those Soft Creamed Shoulders--sweet poem indeed,so nice to be reading you again,talented indeed--Charma
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