Soft Seduction

birds singing
whistling a magical melody
for you and me
the low pitch of a tweet
flutter of wings so sweet
caress my mind
with tender sounds of joy
as your kisses shake my being
shivering beneath your touch
your fingers brush my skin
with pounding heart
I tremble in excitement
the rustle of the grass
beneath our bodies
sways with our beat
nature knows by the soft moan
who wants to be alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/30/2014 9:27:00 PM
BETTY, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful...congrats!
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:18:00 AM
Refreshing delight seduction...kisses shakes the being.. Wow!!! , Congratulations on the awesome win :),olive eloisa here :)
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:03:00 AM
Simply breath taking....I love this...congrats on your fine win.....hugs Tim
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:14:00 AM
Well done Betty and a contest won. First place is awesome place to be... Congratulations from me! Verlena :0))s.
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:57:00 AM
Hi Betty, I haven't been around the new poems, of those I love to read. However, it is sweet to find the ones I miss reading on my contest list... Congratulations... I enjoyed everything about this poem. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/17/2014 6:53:00 PM
Lovely....glad that they can be...undisturbed. :) Sweet
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Date: 4/17/2014 1:23:00 PM
Wow...beautiful and so seductive Betty...I really adore this ....hugs Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/17/2014 2:29:00 PM
Good luck to your Redwings... The Blackhawks hope to see them in the finals...
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Betty Bateson
Date: 4/17/2014 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Tim. That was my mood today.. LOL
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