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Soft Blue Light

soft blue light surrounds me as I walk down the hallway I blink my weary eyes greet shadows on the wall a stillness a nothingness but a refrain the piano playing distorted notes removed from myself I let linger my mind’s eye sees work started a factory work is never complete senseless motions but it is torn down as I make my peace my life still an unanswered call a litany of loves I thought I had let go I still see visions of their faces in white light they smile and for a moment all is good but it's night and I’m alone as my mind says yes but my spent body says no numbers on the face of a clock says three hours to dawn but other lives stir as if they are real

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Date: 5/16/2022 10:00:00 AM
Much musing going on here. You have a smooth reflective style.
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Date: 5/15/2022 7:29:00 PM
I am really taken with your profound musings on the split lives of forever alienated workers, Mike.
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Date: 5/14/2022 11:23:00 PM
Mixed emotions are well-expressed in your well-crafted free verse my dear poet. I like it and I extremely enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you.
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Date: 5/14/2022 5:08:00 AM
Emotions that roil--and keep awake at night--well done, Mike.
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Date: 5/12/2022 10:45:00 PM
Very well depicted emotions, just as I like them.
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