Sofa Surfing

He thought his words were to be of comfort 

to his unstable partner of many turbulent years,

how wrong he was to even show any effort

out on his ear, now needing help from peers

to beg friends for somewhere to lay his head,

displaced, confused, wondering why him

knowing a sofa would have to do no bed,

he had always tried, gone out on a limb

to please her, though it's not her to blame,

her illness she has no control, severe anxiety 

no natural cure, her temper they can't tame,

again sofa surfing looking for some generosity,

after a couple of days he heard her pleading

for him to come home, Her fury had subdued,

He hurries back to her as his heart is bleeding

back to the torment, to be used and abused,

knowing deep down tomorrow she'll be cursing 

and he will be back on the road sofa surfing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 3:51 AM
- A disease that can easily destroy a relationship ... not easy to live with, difficult for both him and her - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for reading and commenting, mental illness can and sometimes is devastating.
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