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Soda Pop Crush

Soda pop crush my how time has flown r Young and scared who could forebear youthful lust before true love was known with citrus colored hair skin so fair Rejection of sweet strawberry giggles sublime in my mind would have been the end of time Reflecting back over my twisting vine I see that young girl now has gone wine We all grow older in the sunshine and rain but true love grew on a new vine happy and twain I hope she is happy with a blush good to see you again little red crush

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2024 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome work being on the winners' list in PD's contest. Excellent. Way to go. Sara K

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2024 3:20:00 PM

Hi, John, what a fun and happy poem. I enjoyed the youthful feeling and imagery. Congratulations, thank you for entering my contest. Always PD ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2024 8:13:00 AM

Interesting work you have penned. Not really sure the interpretation of it though. I remember orange crush and strawberry crush from years ago. I remember I liked the orange kind. I remember also having a crush on a member of the opposite sex. LOL.. If this is for the crush contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

John Beam
Date: 6/8/2024 8:42:00 AM

Yeah the other kind of crush Thanks for sharing.

Tom Woody

Date: 6/8/2024 5:49:00 AM

Cute poem. She has gone wine? I'll have to muse on that a bit

John Beam
Date: 6/8/2024 5:53:00 AM

Thanks had a face book friend request it has been over 30 years since I spoke with her