'sober Mind'

They fade away Like distant memories Do not cling to their toxic remarks It’s meant to pull you down Hidden behind Their smiles and falsified hugs Of reassurance Watch their hands Watch your back Do a double take For the marks made by their knives You might not feel it now It might be just a scratch or two Until it finds a foothold And they grind them deep into your flesh It is so easy to be sucked in The need to belong so strong Until the dark days come And you are left alone Wondering what happened To the joy riders They got off the wagon Once they saw the self destruction sign Up ahead They did it with a smile It is the only thing they know Running away is their expert play Lift your head up Cry if you have to But don’t give up You still have a chance This time do it with a sober mind Do it for you
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Boyle Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 10:42 AM
Outstanding, compels you to reflect. Left alone wondering what happened to the joy riders, you can feel the isolation. Congratulations.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Thanks Wilma. ...needed to read this as well as your other poems.....love your work.
Falotico Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Excellent write from your beautiful soul... luv Michael
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 11:12 PM
Wilma it is so good to see you writing and posting your thoughtful poetry like this one recently. I'm glad to see you here a lot more.
Chircop Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 5:08 PM
Lift your head/cry if you have to/but don.t give up-Yhis is a great advice especially when one is stabbed in the back by those he thought were trustworthy.-excellent mon ami : )
Sanders Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:32 AM
Wilma I really felt your poem thank you so much you are a very good poet.
Marszalowicz Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:19 PM
I get it from a couple points of view the paranoia, the self importance over others, and the potentially dangerous things in the world. well done.
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Wilma congrats on your fabulous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Haick Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 8:36 PM
As I said below, Wilma...this is profound! Congratulations on a wonderful, deserving win! Love and hugs, Annalise
A   Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Wilma, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... :-) nice entry, for Anne's any poem contest. always & forever ** LINDA
Posey Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. You show great talent and wisdom in your writing.... Great work.... Jake
Ryerson Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 2:14 PM
RE: 'Sober Mind'...Dear Ms. Neels - Once again we offer our sincere congratulations on your placement in Ms. Currin's contest. We found this poem very sobering, and as soon as WE sober up, we intend to review it again.We stayed out rather late last night celebrating and offering toasts to you and your fine poetry...We will get back to you as soon as our wives un-shackle us and allow us to leave home. Sincerely, Tim Ryerson: Chairman, The Wilma Neels Poetry Appreciation Society
Hendricks Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Hiya, homegirl. You do me proud with this empowering write. Did you notice the three South African names in a row? Whoopety-whoop-whoop!! Well done with your awesome win, Wilma. Licia :-)
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:00 PM
Really good advice poetically stated. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Ferry Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Congrats. Nicely said
Haick Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 9:57 PM
Profound write, Wilma...we live in a world of deception, and we all carry the scars. However, we will never give up! Hoping all is well. Have a beautiful weekend!
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 8:16 AM
wow, nette here is right. A very empowering poem, dear! One of your best. I love this one.
Onclaud Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 9:51 AM
what an empowering write, wilms... you take me in the center of a daunting scene .. beautifully done!..:) huggs
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:36 PM
had to read this gem twice - such insight here, my friend. love it. lfde x (afraid I can't remember the words those letters stand for but I know it means love from)
Tacito Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Yes. A hugely, resounding yes. Do not rent your mind out to the clutter. Wonderful! I knew you were awesome for a reason! ;)
Sathasivam Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 5:17 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Wisdom is shown here. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Ryerson Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Dear Ms Neels: After reading your poem, we are happy to announce that in our opinion, this is your best work so far...While the whole poem is full of wisdom and insight and beautifully written, we were particularly impressed with the short, succinct 1st and 11th verses...With your permission, we would like to review more of your work... Please send all future correspondence to: [email protected] or simply leave a comment. Thank you...
Ryerson Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:09 PM
PS: Please send us a third person bio describing how you manage to look so beautiful all the time, when we can go out for dinner, what time to pick you up, etc.
Sivey Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 5:32 PM
This is a wonderful and ingenious write my friend! My heart is glad that I don't find myself following this crowd that you so eloquently mentioned, that path to addiction is not present within me, save the addiction to writing poetry, that I'm guilty of! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Anglesey Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Great lines portray the path to addiction. Excellent :)
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