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Soaring With Faith

On this unknown pilgrimage, all’s a maze new stars quake along rims of feathered trees, which guide me through highlands on night's decrees flickering within me despair, ablaze. Quite often, I have climbed the moonlight’s trail for winds can pierce into my heart and know my need to conquer life's most troubled flow; until faith soars, when hints of doubt prevail. Much like a ride, I'll tread the endless course now seen by a voyager's eyes now bold where swallows dart above to reinforce, then clutch pure Light, far fair, I do behold! Contest: Faith sponsored by Nayda I.Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/4/2015 6:12:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2015 2:03:00 AM
Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats nette!
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Date: 8/30/2015 12:33:00 PM
A terrific entry.....and one of the few who went for the New Frontier......you went .......and you blazed the trail !! Congratulations, dear Nette !
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:32:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations Nette.
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Date: 8/19/2015 10:36:00 AM
Again you've treated us to a lovely and intelligent creative write, Nette. hugs!
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Date: 8/18/2015 4:16:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..We all need a new frontier sometimes..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Australia Down Under was a doozie to write..LOL..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2015 2:08:00 PM
Inspiring use of metaphors were outstandingly penned. Seize this adventure!
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Date: 8/18/2015 1:42:00 PM
- Feels good to have some time to read your wonderful poem again, dear friend Nette - Much work again, now is the time to sell my father's house - (Update me a bit on "soup" today :) - I wish you luck in the contest and a great week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/18/2015 1:09:00 PM
It is such an immense pleasure to indulge in you fluent poetry as I embark on a new career. Your image gives off a sleek, uplifting quality to it which makes this poem even more of a delight.
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Date: 8/18/2015 12:03:00 PM
Love it <3
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Date: 8/18/2015 11:29:00 AM
Thrill and anticipation mark this gracious poem with beauty and reflection of a new adventure. Your spirit thrives! My own ride in your contest pleases me. Thank you, Nette!
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