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A young bird in a tree wanted to fly so high for everyone to see but his wings wouldn't fly He thought he was broke But he kept trying each day He perched on a huge oak His wings flapped in May He soared really high Until he reached the sky Contest: Nursery Rhyme Sponsor: Even Roper 03/8/2021

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Greg Gaul

Date: 3/12/2021 11:27:00 AM

Alexis, your alternating lines of rhyme are well crafted. Congratulations on your first place win.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/12/2021 3:35:00 AM

This is so lovely Alexis... Soaring high... Congrats on your win dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2021 3:21:00 AM

- Back with congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2021 11:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Bravo! Well penned!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2021 8:30:00 PM

Alexis, fantastic nursery rhyme with great flow and rhythm. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/11/2021 11:35:00 PM

Hi Eve, You hosted an awesome contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2021 5:13:00 PM

Congrats on your great win in the contest, Alexis. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/11/2021 3:14:00 PM

A charming nursery rhyme like this would inspire any little one with dreams and wonder, Alexis. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice evening :=) Evelyn

Terry Flood

Date: 3/11/2021 2:53:00 PM

Nice win Alexis. Congrats. Terry

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2021 2:47:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/11/2021 1:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this nursery rhyme, well deserved Alexis ~ Belle

Judy Ball

Date: 3/9/2021 9:45:00 AM

It's hard at first when the new little birds are first trying their wings but then suddenly they make it. They just need time to learn before they get caught by one of my cats. darn it. Good stuff Alexis. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/9/2021 9:35:00 AM

So cute my dear friend - I love it and wish you loads of luck Alexis - it's been a fun contest - stay well and love and hugs back to you from across this vast pond. Jennifer xxxxxx

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/9/2021 5:26:00 AM

What a beautiful nursery rhyme. Perfect for the age group and a superb entry for the contest. Well done my friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/8/2021 10:58:00 PM

Lovely and cute poem. Little by little we achieve our dreams.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/8/2021 6:28:00 PM

Dear Alexis, your lovely poem is a perfect nursery rhyme with vivid imagery about growing up wrapped in a gentle lesson about perseverance. Your gifted pen is ever uplifting. Best wishes for a win, my dear friend, and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/8/2021 5:13:00 PM

Ha, ha! Watch the birdie! Cute! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2021 1:57:00 PM

very cute, Alexis. This is a fun contest. i wrote mine the other day and just have not even had time yet to type up the other poems i wrote on Sunday!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/8/2021 1:19:00 PM

Delightful--and uplifting. Well done, Alexis.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2021 11:24:00 AM

There is a great lesson here for young children. Persistence pays off. I cheer for this remarkable little bird learning to fly! Best wishes in the contest, Hon. Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2021 10:56:00 AM

... oh... lovely poem, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2021 10:36:00 AM

A lovely nursery rhyme, this should be in a book with all the other entries ive seen. Tom

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/8/2021 10:16:00 AM

That’s lovely Alexis, a nursery rhyme that’ll teach children to never give up on something they'd like to do so much. Belle :-)

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/8/2021 10:23:00 AM

Hi Belle, Thank you very much. I wanted to work weave a lesson in the story. I appreciate your support. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2021 9:23:00 AM

Delightful writing! Happy Women's Day dearest, Alexis xxx

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/8/2021 9:55:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, Thank you so much; I didn't know it was Women's Day. I appreciate your support, my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2021 8:15:00 AM

Ahh!! I like this one that teaches a lesson. I am sure it would be used to entertain and educate little ones if on the market. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/8/2021 10:13:00 AM

WoW! Sara, Thank you so much for such an awesome comment. I found this contest to be very challenging. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate that you stopped by today. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2021 7:16:00 AM

aww this is so cute Alexis and is a lesson to keep on trying until you reach your goal:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/8/2021 10:21:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I find it a challenge to come up with a nursery rhyme. I was going to write about Sam the Beaver. Thanks for stopping by, my friend:-)Alexis