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Soaring Birds

Soaring birds, in the sky Lack of words, so I sigh One last breath, for my sake before death, I must take One last look, at the birds by the brook, I hear words August 22, 2021 Chose Image # 1

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2021 7:36:00 PM

Back with congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2021 4:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win Vie, Very nicely done

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/24/2021 10:59:00 AM

Nice, I like this one, short and sweet, you have said it all..One last Look...Delice

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/23/2021 9:34:00 PM

Beautiful poem and picture. Even without the picture, your words took me straight to this wondrous scene! Good luck in the contest!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/23/2021 11:53:00 AM

Bound to be a Mo and Lindsay Laurie favourite!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/23/2021 2:24:00 AM

Brilliant ideas and emotions. Best for a win. Hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2021 7:22:00 PM

Dear friend Rose, this is an amazing verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs,

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2021 9:44:00 PM

Thank you for dropping in Lasaad

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2021 7:06:00 PM

awesome and perfect verse, Mystic. Good luck in the contest. Hugs sweet friend

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/22/2021 9:44:00 PM

Thank you for your help Eve, much appreciated love xo