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Soaked In Sadness

I went to my tub Turned on the tap Watched as my sadness Filled it to the top The worries of many days In the water crystal clear displayed Deep beneath the surface layed Summoning to me Please come in I stripped down To my essence The discarded garments In a pile on the floor The yesterday man I didn't need anymore I climbed in Sunk into the sadness Allowed it to caress Warm Somehow comfort As it washed over me Invigorating my complacency Calming Saving Staving off My insanity This was my attempt At C'est La Vie Layers of yesterday's regrets The calls of unpaid debts The reasons I choose to be upset All caught in liquid suspension Relieving my built up tension Once I was fully cleansed I was able to begin again Pulling the plug I watched it all go down the drain Extricating Relieving the pain I lifted myself Dripping on the floor Done with the sadness I didn't need it anymore I stepped over the clothes On the floor Left them behind Walked out that door Ready and willing To face the world again A brighter Cleaner Version of me An empty tub Happier And free C'est La Vie Inspired by Eileen Ghali's poem "Maddening Rain"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/13/2014 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Richard.
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win,
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Date: 11/13/2014 12:23:00 AM
Loved it Richard, great story - the last lines rock! Congrats
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Date: 11/12/2014 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Richard, this is quite the write my friend.
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:04:00 PM
Beautifully penned Richard - cleansing our mind body and soul - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:38:00 PM
Congrats on the win Richard.
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:38:00 AM
Such a creative and eloquent way you have of speaking. I could never have my fill of your words. I love the idea of washing away the sadness. I have always imagined that rain is God's way of bathing his children, like any loving parent bathes little ones. (except it would take a pretty big bathtub to get everyone in!)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2013 9:03:00 AM
Ha, ha, I guess that is why God went with the flood. In my mind I am faving this comment. You are very kind.
Date: 12/4/2013 5:14:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2013 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Ndaba.
Date: 12/4/2013 2:27:00 PM
awesome write, Rick - so glad to read your footnote after that!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2013 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I have been in a good place for a long time now.
Date: 12/4/2013 11:31:00 AM
whoo.. using water as a creative tool makes this piece utterly inviting, healing.. a breathless artword, rich.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2013 4:12:00 PM
What a great comment, thanks!
Date: 12/4/2013 8:28:00 AM
:) What an amazing poem, RIchard. It's been a while since my writing has inspired.....I'm glad. So glad because this is simply beautiful beyond description. So deep, meaningful. One way to understand pain....Yes....afterwards....when understanding has come, cleansing is complete.....it can all go down the drain. Thank you....There is an F missing (myself) in first line of last stanza...Going to my favorites. I need a bath! ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2013 8:34:00 AM
I'm glad you are the first to comment. Thanks for catching my typo.

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