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So Pale the Moon

There was a lack of cricket's chirping sounds, no shadows in chilled darkness that surrounds. So pale the moon, night jasmine had not bloomed Heavy, the air to breathe, but not perfumed No howling wolves. Their kill was consumed. All was still on the surface of the sea as a foreboding fright washed over me Such silence portends something was awry Stars were losing their sparkle in the sky I shivered with fear while wondering, why? On crested waves I raced, with unfurled sails, emotions gave way to mournful cries and wails. How I yearned for wings so I could take flight I was cloaked in loneliness through the night. Unbridled tears fell in the pale moonlight.

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Date: 5/14/2021 10:20:00 AM
You captured that forboding feeling well in your poem Jenna when you feel like something bad is going to happen. Ive been away so haven't been on here for a week. Hope you're well. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/14/2021 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, and I am happy to see you, Tom. Glad your doing well on your adventure. Hugs.
Date: 5/11/2021 1:17:00 PM
Dark sad poem ( the way I like them really) But I hope it's fiction. Bright imagery and deep emotions. Hugs
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/11/2021 1:55:00 PM
It’s total fiction, Victor. Thank you for being concerned.
Date: 5/11/2021 10:25:00 AM
An incredibly penned prose, I enjoyed reading it, especially these two verses; So pale the moon, night jasmine had not bloomed Heavy, the air to breathe, but not perfumed Great Job, Jenna, blessings, and hugs
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/11/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for liking this one, Lasaad.

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