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So Much Lovelier Than Any Tree

I think that I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree* although the poem you wrote for me celebrating the anniversary of my sixtieth year oh how I wish I could hear your voice as you read it out loud You had never written a poem before so proud was I as I gazed in awe Your words I will write and to my delight I picture your face and those twinkling blue eyes as my poetry brings your words alive… “In ’47 full of grace A child was born with a freckly face Lovely red hair and a smile so sweet She swept all who saw her off their feet The smile is still there ~ so is the grace The charm ~ the fun ~ and the freckly face One thing is missing ~ that lovely red hair It has grown out naturally and is now strawberry fair You would never know she’s an OAP Looking so lovely as all can see So this special day ~ sixty years on time to celebrate with champagne and song! And now in tears looking back at those years how fast that time has gone when you wrote for me your poetry then nine months on and you had gone… I hear your voice read out to me words of love in your poetry those special words from you to me are so much lovelier than any tree… Written 8th February 2020 Reference to: ‘I think that I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree’ by Joyce Kilmer* Contest Name Famous poetic lines 2 Sponsor Silent One 2nd Place Contest Strand Select H Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 3/2/2021 7:02:00 AM
Your poem made me cry, Ann. So beautiful ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/2/2021 1:56:00 PM
Awww dear Line, thank you. I remember when Frank gave me the poem I cried tears of joy. I am so glad I was able to incorporate his poem into mine for SO 's beautiful contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/20/2020 11:01:00 PM
This is gorgeous. Congratulations on your plural wins. Frank is no doubt pleased.
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Date: 3/25/2020 8:36:00 AM
Lovely comments and congrats, yes I am sure Frank would be utterly thrilled to see his words in print, haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/13/2020 7:39:00 PM
Beautiful, Ann. Enjoyed your poem immensely.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/14/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Line, Frank would be rather pleased that his poem was now 'out there' for all to see, haha... With kinest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Wow!!!!! What a love story. I love the line, "Its time to celebrate with Champagne and Song!" Please do not forget to always celebrate with Champagne and Song. I find as we get older we forget to do this. Have a wonderful day.......
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/10/2020 11:38:00 PM
Wonderful comments dear Paula, thank you. Yes you are right about the Champagne & Song, my birthday is in March so already have the 'champers' on ice, haha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/10/2020 3:36:00 PM
Truly superb poetry my friend. . Congratulations on your win. God bless..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/10/2020 11:36:00 PM
Gosh Robert, such a compliment coming from you - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/9/2020 2:15:00 PM
This poem is one for the heart Ann. I found it so lovely and touching. Congratulations on your well deserved win! xxoo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2020 2:18:00 PM
Oh bless you Connie for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/9/2020 12:00:00 PM
- An inspiring poetic work, Ann ... well deserved win, congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2020 12:12:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise for your kind words. With hugs from Ann xx
Date: 2/9/2020 10:42:00 AM
Fond memories Ann, congrats on your win. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Tom, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/9/2020 6:15:00 AM
Your poem is a lovely as a tree... a lovely recount of your love... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2020 7:06:00 AM
Such a lovely comment SO and I thank you so much for my 2nd place in your contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/8/2020 1:20:00 PM
Wow! This is amazing! Keep listening to those words read to you, so lovingly Ann :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 1:36:00 PM
Oh bless you dear Heidi thank you so much for your wonderful comments and I am so glad you like it too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/8/2020 10:54:00 AM
This is lovely...especially the poem he wrote for you...
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo for your lovely comments and I always appreciate your kind visits. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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