So Much Lovelier Than Any Tree

I think that I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree*
although the poem you wrote for me
celebrating the anniversary
of my sixtieth year 
oh how I wish I could hear
your voice as you read it out loud
You had never written a poem before
so proud was I as I gazed in awe
 
Your words I will write
and to my delight 
I picture your face 
and those twinkling blue eyes
as my poetry brings your words alive…
   
     “In ’47 full of grace
      A child was born with a freckly face
      Lovely red hair and a smile so sweet
      She swept all who saw her off their feet
      The smile is still there  ~ so is the grace
      The charm ~ the fun ~ and the freckly face
      One thing is missing ~ that lovely red hair
      It has grown out naturally and is now strawberry fair
      You would never know she’s an OAP
      Looking so lovely as all can see
      So this special day ~ sixty years on
      time to celebrate with champagne and song!

And now in tears 
looking back at those years
how fast that time has gone
when you wrote for me your poetry
then nine months on 
and you had gone…

I hear your voice read out to me
words of love in your poetry
those special words from you to me 
are so much lovelier than any tree…

Written 8th February 2020

Reference to: ‘I think that I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree’ by Joyce Kilmer*

Contest Name	Famous poetic lines 2 
Sponsor  Silent One
2nd Place

Contest Strand Select H
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Your poem made me cry, Ann. So beautiful ~
Gilmour Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Awww dear Line, thank you. I remember when Frank gave me the poem I cried tears of joy. I am so glad I was able to incorporate his poem into mine for SO 's beautiful contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 11:01 PM
This is gorgeous. Congratulations on your plural wins. Frank is no doubt pleased.
Gilmour Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Lovely comments and congrats, yes I am sure Frank would be utterly thrilled to see his words in print, haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 7:39 PM
Beautiful, Ann. Enjoyed your poem immensely.
Gilmour Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Line, Frank would be rather pleased that his poem was now 'out there' for all to see, haha... With kinest thoughts Ann xx
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. Wow!!!!! What a love story. I love the line, "Its time to celebrate with Champagne and Song!" Please do not forget to always celebrate with Champagne and Song. I find as we get older we forget to do this. Have a wonderful day.......
Gilmour Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Wonderful comments dear Paula, thank you. Yes you are right about the Champagne & Song, my birthday is in March so already have the 'champers' on ice, haha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Lindley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Truly superb poetry my friend. . Congratulations on your win. God bless..
Gilmour Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Gosh Robert, such a compliment coming from you - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 2:15 PM
This poem is one for the heart Ann. I found it so lovely and touching. Congratulations on your well deserved win! xxoo
Gilmour Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Oh bless you Connie for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 12:00 PM
- An inspiring poetic work, Ann ... well deserved win, congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise for your kind words. With hugs from Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Fond memories Ann, congrats on your win. Tom
Gilmour Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Tom, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
One Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 6:15 AM
Your poem is a lovely as a tree... a lovely recount of your love... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gilmour Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Such a lovely comment SO and I thank you so much for my 2nd place in your contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Wow! This is amazing! Keep listening to those words read to you, so lovingly Ann :)
Gilmour Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Oh bless you dear Heidi thank you so much for your wonderful comments and I am so glad you like it too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Michael Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 10:54 AM
This is lovely...especially the poem he wrote for you...
Gilmour Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Thank you so much Arturo for your lovely comments and I always appreciate your kind visits. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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