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So Much In Love - Lyrics Again Contest

I think of you ... when I hear music
Whilst play..ing  .....our special song

The tears I shed are no deny...ing ......
of the loss ..... inside

I feel you close.....your kisses haunt me
I Love you so, ......why did u go

You said goodbye with teardrops falling
Whispering that you don't want ... to leave me ...leave me so

I wait for letters, saying .... that u miss me 
your calls  to hear you say my name

Come spring we'll be ... together
Ne'er ...to part ..... to part again

I bite my lips to stop from crying
from shouting .....out .....your name

I write each day to you my darling
in my dia..ry of love ... to ease .... ease the pain

Violin 

Want to reach out and feel .... you near me
hold you close, ....never let go
I love u so my heart .... is breaking
the pieces blowing .....in the wind

My life is lonely  here without you
Walking the avenue of love

Wishing that you were here beside me
Holding my hand ..so much in love


Violin

So ...much ...in ...love

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 7:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Serena.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 6:04:00 PM

Thank you Brenda, hope you sang my words to the music, they fit quite well...Seren

Margaret Franceschini

Date: 9/28/2014 9:26:00 AM

seren, beautiful love song and your heart spoke lyrics to the music. i enjoyed so much! thank you for your talent hugs

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 6:05:00 PM

Hello Margaret, did you listen to the music as you read the winners......Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 9/27/2014 9:50:00 PM

I just sang this and it was beautiful....congrats on your great win....hugs Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/27/2014 10:32:00 PM

so where is the copy of your singing Tim.... thanks for congrats ....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 3:44:00 PM

wonderful flow to this lyric - i especially adore the final two stanzas - so much hope here Seren many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/27/2014 8:33:00 PM

I am in shock that I was placed, when I listened and listened and listened to the music,I felt as though it was writing itself, then after a few lines had to start thinking.lol...Seren