Constance La France Poet Lyric

So Hydro-Licious

Hair, hair, hair, oh my long, long hair
ooooh the smooth bliss of it
the creamy swirl of it . . .
 
so hydro-licious . . . . 
oooooooh hair, hair hair, my long, long hair

quenched with moisture . . .
scented with crushed berries, ya ya ya
curly, wispy feathered hair, no merci
silky and shiny, that's my hair . . .

so hydro-licious
oooooooh hair, hair, hair, my long, long hair

ooooh the glossy, velvet feel of it
the richness of it . . . 
falling, like a waterfall, ya ya ya
sweet and sassy with kissing curls, no, no,  no 

so hydro-licious
oooooooh hair, hair, hair, my long, long hair


so hydro-licious
oooooooh hair, hair, hair, my long, long hair


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May 26, 2015


Poetry/Lyric/So Hydro-Licious
Copyright Protected, ID 05-677-102-26
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Product Inspiration - Herbal Essence Shampoo


Written for the Standardcontest, Sing Me... A Jingle,
sponsor, Lyric Man, Judged 2015

First Place

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Skat A July 19, 2015 at 2:44 PM Broken, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT

Viv Wigley July 19, 2015 at 12:35 AM Makes me want to go and buy some, and I will when I get some more hair. Great write, BW, congratulations, Viv x

Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 10:37 PM Congratulations on your win, Broken Wing, I love the jingle. Hugs Eve

Tim Smith July 18, 2015 at 2:31 PM Nice Jingle I see how it made it on top...congrats

Alexis Y. July 18, 2015 at 2:11 PM BW, this is a great jingle. It has a nice flow also. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-)Alexis

Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 1:33 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless July 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM WELL, not since the musical HAIR have I encountered such a tribute to the fallacy fanatic. This is really well done, complete with all the oooh's and aaaah's of the coiffed culture.

Richard Lamoureux May 27, 2015 at 8:47 AM This is fun Constance, good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick May 27, 2015 at 7:48 AM Reads like a winner..Great ad for the product..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 4:04 PM fun write - good luck for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian May 26, 2015 at 1:53 PM :) This is sweet, Broken Wings. :) I liked it. I love it when hair is all the things you say. I admit....I'm hair crazy! For my it's coconut scented shampoos and conditioners. :) YA YA YA! :) Cute poem!

Nandita Das May 26, 2015 at 11:03 AM So wonderful, I am inspired to try this out...7

Viv Wigley May 26, 2015 at 6:52 AM Great R 'n B jingle, BW. Rinse and repeat. Good luck, Viv x

Tim Ryerson May 26, 2015 at 6:23 AM Yep, and I bet that's what you use on your beautiful, black and 'long, long hair'...I know I've said this before, but I LOVE seeing your funny and playful side. More please...

Laura Leiser May 26, 2015 at 12:01 AM Fun poem to read! Enjoyed it! :)