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So Far Away

I noticed today you are so far away, I felt the remoteness of the distance- Since you’ve been gone, I’ve not much to say, you have shielded yourself with resistance. I remembered today how you left without warning, no time for me to accept your awful goodbye- Now I live in anguish, every minute I’m mourning, and there’s never a twinkle of joy in my eye. I found out today you’re happy and free, I’m stuck in a mindset of stoicism and so aloof- Why couldn’t you stay and love only me? I guess in loving me you had no proof. I realized today it’s time for me to let go, no linger shall I drown in misery and pain- All the days of heartache and endless woe, now so far away you shall always remain. July 8, 2017

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Date: 8/1/2017 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 7/13/2017 6:40:00 AM
"no linger ... shall i drown ... in misery ...and pain" .... typo ...or ... just a mark ...
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Date: 7/13/2017 6:44:00 AM
Date: 7/8/2017 12:00:00 PM
I feel the emotion when reading this. Well done. I love the rhyme scheme and choice of words
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Date: 7/8/2017 11:01:00 AM
wow. well done! the words connect and bring meaning, and it was with a tinge of sadness as i progressed, wanting to see the end of the story, i was engrossed too. nice! cheers!
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