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flakes of luscious beauty a slowmotion downpour a sprinkling of white flecks tinkling without a sound its veil of peace over one and all in serene silence as if time were eternal AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Posted on January 13, 2023

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Date: 1/15/2023 12:15:00 PM
In the south we see snow so sparsely that it definitely is a time to slow down and enjoy the beauty. I enjoy the time when it is so quiet, and the only sound is the landing of each flake. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/15/2023 2:15:00 PM
Yes indeed ~ the sound of snowflakes landing is divine ~
Date: 1/14/2023 9:39:00 AM
Oh, such a beautiful poem, Line! "In serene silence, as if time were eternal" just lovely. I've read it over and over and faving.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/14/2023 11:24:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, Ann ~
Date: 1/13/2023 8:52:00 PM
Such a peaceful, tranquil scene, I especially like 'a slowmotion downpour' -
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Date: 1/13/2023 9:20:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle ~ much appreciated
Date: 1/13/2023 8:39:00 PM
The "veil of peace," yes, the fascination of movement so completely quiet. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/13/2023 9:20:00 PM
Very calming indeed ~ thanks, Elizabeth
Date: 1/13/2023 3:33:00 PM
Hello Lin, it is wonderful to watch the snowfal coming to the ground. Inching slowly to the corners of the lawn. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2023 10:51:00 AM
Hello Lin, I enjoy to watch the snowflakes fall to the ground. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/13/2023 4:38:00 PM
Absolutely ~ thanks, Darlene