Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Snowy Sunday

flakes of luscious beauty
a slowmotion downpour
a sprinkling of white flecks
tinkling without a sound
its veil of peace over one and all
in serene silence as if time were eternal



AP: Honorable Mention 2023

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Sara Kendrick January 15, 2023 at 12:15 PM In the south we see snow so sparsely that it definitely is a time to slow down and enjoy the beauty. I enjoy the time when it is so quiet, and the only sound is the landing of each flake. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara Line Gauthier January 15, 2023 at 2:15 PM Yes indeed ~ the sound of snowflakes landing is divine ~

Ann Peck January 14, 2023 at 9:39 AM Oh, such a beautiful poem, Line! "In serene silence, as if time were eternal" just lovely. I've read it over and over and faving. Line Gauthier January 14, 2023 at 11:24 AM Thanks for the lovely compliment, Ann ~

Michelle Faulkner January 13, 2023 at 8:52 PM Such a peaceful, tranquil scene, I especially like 'a slowmotion downpour' - Line Gauthier January 13, 2023 at 9:20 PM Thanks, Michelle ~ much appreciated

Elizabeth Mccann January 13, 2023 at 8:39 PM The "veil of peace," yes, the fascination of movement so completely quiet. Elizabeth Line Gauthier January 13, 2023 at 9:20 PM Very calming indeed ~ thanks, Elizabeth

Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2023 at 3:33 PM Hello Lin, it is wonderful to watch the snowfal coming to the ground. Inching slowly to the corners of the lawn. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu January 14, 2023 at 10:51 AM Hello Lin, I enjoy to watch the snowflakes fall to the ground. Hugs. Line Gauthier January 13, 2023 at 4:38 PM Absolutely ~ thanks, Darlene