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Snowless Winter Woods

The oak trees are an endless sea of grey; The waves roll over hills until they melt Into a grey horizon under dim Midwinter skies. The world is sepia toned; The flowers in the glades no longer wear Their splendid summer colors. Dry and brown, They hold up their spent seed heads full of pride Because they have achieved their destiny. A dogwood tree lies cut, its swelling buds A promise that will never be fulfilled. Behind pale pointy palisades of reeds The lonely pond does still reflect the sky. December 14, 2016

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Date: 7/20/2018 9:08:00 AM
Belated congrats on your win, Agnes.
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Date: 5/20/2017 6:46:00 PM
Love the amazing imagery in your fine poem, Agnes! Congrats on your win :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 5/20/2017 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Laura.
Date: 5/20/2017 5:39:00 PM
Majestic trees even in Winter. Congrats, Agnes!
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Date: 5/20/2017 7:01:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/20/2017 2:44:00 PM
Agnes, such a beautiful poem! Congratulations :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 5/20/2017 7:01:00 PM
Thanks, Darren.
Date: 5/20/2017 2:13:00 PM
Agnes, this is a beautiful poem! Congrats on your win in my contest. Janice
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 5/20/2017 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice; I am so glad you liked my poem.
Date: 12/31/2016 11:16:00 AM
Agnes, congratulations on your wonderful podium win for this lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/31/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Date: 12/30/2016 8:35:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Agnes:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 12/30/2016 12:31:00 PM
Well done Agnes, deserving congratulations...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Date: 12/30/2016 5:32:00 AM
I love your blank verse, your imagery is superior. Great use of the word, palisades. Congratulations on your placement; but more so on your piece.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments.
Date: 12/29/2016 10:48:00 PM
What a beautiful way of expressing, subdued shades. Congrats!
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Date: 12/30/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal.
Date: 12/29/2016 7:38:00 PM
Love your poem, Agnes, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true… and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas ? Hugs Eve
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/29/2016 8:12:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Happy New Year to you, too. (No peas for me though; I am not familiar with the tradition.)
Date: 12/16/2016 9:22:00 AM
The poetry in the lonely pond is delicately nice ...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/21/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thanks, Probir.
Date: 12/16/2016 4:02:00 AM
Love the thoughts that went behind your creativity. Taking a vision of nature and relating it visually to such great detail of emotion of the plant life and death of such.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/21/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and you kind comment, Michael.
Date: 12/14/2016 7:19:00 PM
Reads as if you are looking out my back door, Mrs Agnes:) I feel right at home in this poem. My kind of writing.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/21/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel - I imagine it does look similar where you are :)
Date: 12/14/2016 5:05:00 PM
such wonderful winter imagery Agnes. i love the transition of the seasons and love your descriptive write:-) hugs jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/21/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. There is beauty in all seasons.
Date: 12/14/2016 1:24:00 PM
This was really well written Agnes and creates a lonely, desolate picture of the season perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/21/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks for visiting and you nice comment, Chris.

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