Snowless Winter Woods

The oak trees are an endless sea of grey;
The waves roll over hills until they melt
Into a grey horizon under dim
Midwinter skies. The world is sepia toned;
The flowers in the glades no longer wear
Their splendid summer colors. Dry and brown,
They hold up their spent seed heads full of pride
Because they have achieved their destiny.
A dogwood tree lies cut, its swelling buds
A promise that will never be fulfilled.
Behind pale pointy palisades of reeds
The lonely pond does still reflect the sky.

December 14, 2016
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Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Belated congrats on your win, Agnes.
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Love the amazing imagery in your fine poem, Agnes! Congrats on your win :)
Krampe Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Laura.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Majestic trees even in Winter. Congrats, Agnes!
Krampe Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Thanks, Kim.
White Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 2:44 PM
Agnes, such a beautiful poem! Congratulations :)
Krampe Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Thanks, Darren.
Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Agnes, this is a beautiful poem! Congrats on your win in my contest. Janice
Krampe Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice; I am so glad you liked my poem.
Haight Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Agnes, congratulations on your wonderful podium win for this lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Agnes:-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Well done Agnes, deserving congratulations...
Krampe Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Poteet Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 5:32 AM
I love your blank verse, your imagery is superior. Great use of the word, palisades. Congratulations on your placement; but more so on your piece.
Krampe Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments.
Nusker Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 10:48 PM
What a beautiful way of expressing, subdued shades. Congrats!
Krampe Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Thank you, Afzal.
Roper Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Love your poem, Agnes, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true… and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas ? Hugs Eve
Krampe Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thanks, Eve. Happy New Year to you, too. (No peas for me though; I am not familiar with the tradition.)
Gupta Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:22 AM
The poetry in the lonely pond is delicately nice ...
Krampe Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Thanks, Probir.
Tor Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 4:02 AM
Love the thoughts that went behind your creativity. Taking a vision of nature and relating it visually to such great detail of emotion of the plant life and death of such.
Krampe Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Thanks for your visit and you kind comment, Michael.
Turner Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Reads as if you are looking out my back door, Mrs Agnes:) I feel right at home in this poem. My kind of writing.
Krampe Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Daniel - I imagine it does look similar where you are :)
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 5:05 PM
such wonderful winter imagery Agnes. i love the transition of the seasons and love your descriptive write:-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, Jan. There is beauty in all seasons.
Green Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 1:24 PM
This was really well written Agnes and creates a lonely, desolate picture of the season perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Krampe Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thanks for visiting and you nice comment, Chris.
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