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In my dream I am walking through the frozen snow, past snow drifts like swans asleep in a wintry meadow; and drifting in the cold is the song of a little sparrow . . . Then, many are singing like the low wails of a violin, and the wind is whispering as the snowflakes begin; like gauzy curtains of infinite white they twirl and spin, and in this winter storm I am lost within. I raise my hands for the filigree flakes like lace, and the snowflakes soft as a lover's kiss my face; all through the forest the snow and trees embrace, with a winter scene before me where all things interlace. Crystalline ice drips from branches like diamonds, and imagine that I lay myself down in winter woodlands; dreaming, dreaming of trees with festive garlands; and birds of color like Christmas balls by the thousands. I gasp for breath in the frosty, frigid bitter air, for it is time to leave this ice-kissed dream- oh tear; how I wish for a warm coat not a white gown threadbare, and now the snowflakes are falling, falling everywhere. ________________________ December 4, 2017 (Edited) Poetry/Rhyme/Snowflakes Falling Everywhere Copyright Protected, ID 17-1150-629-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest,Your Choice (4) sponsor, Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Date: 7/6/2019 2:59:00 PM
Snowflake soft kiss my face Delightful!
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Date: 6/9/2019 3:18:00 AM
Exquisitely done in the ways of the old master poets, Constance. Your imagery is infectious!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/9/2019 12:07:00 PM
Caren, thank you for the compliment and oh yes I am inspired by the old masters ~
Date: 6/8/2019 3:40:00 AM
Love the imagery, being in snowless Hawaii, other than our snow-capped mountain, no closer to us than the continental USA Constance--Best Wishes indeed! Aloha William
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/8/2019 1:13:00 PM
Hehe! Hawaii summers makes us wonder, "What happened to the other three?" Aloha William
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2019 8:48:00 AM
William, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, I do love that we have 4 seasons in Canada but honestly this year it felt like only . . . two winter and summer ~
Date: 6/7/2019 8:11:00 PM
This is so pretty! I imagine your dream...laying down in snow.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2019 8:46:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment, appreciate so much ~

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