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Snowflakes

We kissed as snowflakes gently fell Now only timeless memories dwell 11-14-16 Alexis Y

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 1:15:00 PM

Very romantically expressed!

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 1:20:00 PM

Hi Afzal, I'm glad you like it. This was my first attempt to write in this form. I appreciate the support: -) Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2016 8:04:00 AM

This is a beautiful, romantic two-liner, tinged with sadness, Alexis. It would have been ideal for the Crystalline contest. Regards // paul

John Hardison

Date: 11/14/2016 9:48:00 PM

Sweet and gentle as love should be. Peace Love and Joy

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:54:00 PM

Hi John, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you visited me today:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2016 9:32:00 PM

This is so creative Hugs

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:36:00 PM

Hi Eve, It's good to see you. Thank you so much: -) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2016 9:15:00 PM

very nice one, Alexis. So sweet.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:38:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. I'm glad you stopped by:-) Alexis

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 11/14/2016 2:28:00 PM

Very romantic xxx

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:39:00 PM

Hi Wendy, I appreciate that you saw it as very romantic. Thanks for stopping by:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/14/2016 2:26:00 PM

Very romantic poem, Alexis. The melted snowflakes are wet reminders of those gentle kisses. Lovely poem. Many blessings of love and peace to you. RW

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:42:00 PM

Hi Freddie, Now that is what I call a great comment. I appreciate your support my friend. :-) Alexis

Daver Austin

Date: 11/14/2016 10:34:00 AM

Winter of sad reflection. Nice work. Love, daver

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:43:00 PM

Hi Daver, Thank you so much for such a kind comment: -) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 11/14/2016 8:27:00 AM

This is beautiful, soft, tender and such a nice piece to read this morning. Though we don't get much snow where I am, the thought of kissing the one you love as snowflakes gently fall about is euphoric to me.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:45:00 PM

Hi Chris, Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment. I really a big smile on my face. Thanks for being the first to comment:-)Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/14/2016 8:16:00 AM

This is a beautiful memory to cherish, Alexis:)

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:49:00 PM

Hi John, I really enjoy your visits and your awesome comments:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:47:00 PM

Hi Jo, Thank you so much. This was my first attempt at this form. I guess I did ok. I appreciate your support: -) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/14/2016 8:14:00 AM

I hate snow but I like this poem! I'll bet those flakes melted. Nice. huggicicles! ~ j

Chris Green

Date: 11/14/2016 8:01:00 AM

This is beautiful and really touches the heart. Two short lines, so much love and feelings expressed. Beautifully done Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:50:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend: -) Alexis