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Snowfall

The evening seems to draw a breath, then stretches a silence like hide pulled tight across a large, expectant drum. Moonlight chromes four rusted garden chairs and sets each with a sense of someone gone, a presence imprinted on vacated spaces left years ago. Clouds move in soundless haste to heal the tiny patch of sky through which the moon has bled its light. Snow begins to fall and takes whatever light remains to illuminate the passage of each fragile flake until they reach the ground, melt, and are gone.

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Date: 4/3/2023 11:37:00 AM
I like these words particularly: "Moonlight chromes four rusted garden chairs and sets each with a sense of someone gone, a presence imprinted on vacated spaces left years ago" I'm not sure why - very powerful
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 5:40:00 PM
Very perceptive of you re the four chairs, deep with meaning and significance for me as it is a reference to the passing of 4 family members including a twin sister some years ago. Thankyou for taking in....Paul
Date: 9/23/2022 4:09:00 PM
very precious, each word well place, I enjoyed your poem this evening, thank you for sharing
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/24/2022 3:21:00 AM
Hi Rose, Very much appreciate your comments...good to know the words have managed to communicate that illusive moment. Thankyou for the feedback..... kind regards, Paul

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