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Snowfall

The dust of the Gods falls With a certain sense of grace. Unlike cousin Rain, She does not fall In lament, Each splash of sorrow bringing life to barren ground. Unlike cousin Hail, She does not fall In anger, Each explosion of hatred colliding with that which binds. No, The white powder has pride, She falls For freedom, Resisting gravity but not striking back at the foe, Floating in silent peace, Whilst dancing in extravagant jubilation, She gently lands among her waiting sisters.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/12/2009 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Karl. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:59:00 PM
Karl, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:39:00 PM
What a wonderful way to bring warmth from the cold. Your words bring peace to something that I once saw as frigid and often dangerous, I don't think I will ever see snow the same. Beautiful write, very deserving of being featured this week. Congratulations. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, GB Always Tyesha
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:59:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen Karl. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:36:00 AM
Congrats Karl on your personification "Snowfall" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:49:00 AM
I love the imagination in this poem! ~Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/16/2008 10:27:00 PM
Gerat imagery, welcome to poetry soup.
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