Snowfall

The dust of the Gods falls 
With a certain sense of grace.

Unlike cousin Rain,
She does not fall 
In lament,
Each splash of sorrow bringing life to barren ground.

Unlike cousin Hail,
She does not fall
In anger,
Each explosion of hatred colliding with that which binds.

No,
The white powder has pride,
She falls
For freedom,
Resisting gravity but not striking back at the foe,
Floating in silent peace, 
Whilst dancing in extravagant jubilation,
She gently lands among her waiting sisters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Karl. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2009 at 9:59 PM
Karl, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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March 27, 2009 at 11:39 PM
What a wonderful way to bring warmth from the cold. Your words bring peace to something that I once saw as frigid and often dangerous, I don't think I will ever see snow the same. Beautiful write, very deserving of being featured this week. Congratulations. Smiles from Lolita
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March 27, 2009 at 11:23 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, GB Always Tyesha
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March 27, 2009 at 2:59 AM
great and glorious is thy pen Karl. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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March 26, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Congrats Karl on your personification "Snowfall" being featured. Vince
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 25, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your featured write! Kirstie
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March 23, 2009 at 10:49 AM
I love the imagination in this poem! ~Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Carrie
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March 23, 2009 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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November 16, 2008 at 10:27 PM
Gerat imagery, welcome to poetry soup.
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