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Snow Joke - For Dodoitsu Contest

Snow Joke - dodoitsu Demon clouds ride icy winds, cold unfeeling harbingers, blowing dead the flames of warmth’s wingless snow angels. 11/5/2015 submitted to – Winter Dodoitsu – Poetry Contest sponsor – Heather Ober

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/19/2015 5:30:00 PM
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Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 11/17/2015 6:55:00 AM
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i like this one because it's a different take, an alternative to the pretty side of winter that most people opted for - very well written, too! - congrats on your win
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2015 7:14:00 AM
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Thank you Charlotte for your continued expectation of excellence in your contest and for my placement in this one.
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Skat A
Date: 11/14/2015 7:47:00 AM
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John, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2015 7:13:00 AM
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Thanks SKAT congrats appreciated
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/14/2015 5:48:00 AM
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John, lovely oxymoron, metaphor and imagery,..BIG CONGRATULATIONS on the win!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2015 7:12:00 AM
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Thanks Olive for your kind words and support.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 8:19:00 PM
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A unique take on winter, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2015 7:10:00 AM
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Kim, as I age I more fully understand the bears decision to close their eyes until spring.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2015 2:41:00 PM
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clever title and i love the poem many congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/17/2015 7:09:00 AM
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Thanks Jan always nice to hear from you.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/12/2015 5:38:00 AM
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A very expressive dodoitsu, John; a winner, in my eyes! Winter's cold and gloom can be very inspirational. #7 All the best. // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 11/12/2015 8:11:00 AM
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Thanks for the high mark and the visit Paul
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2015 8:40:00 PM
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I like how you made yours dark! Great imagery.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 8:22:00 PM
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Yup! Turned back the clocks and the dark got me.....
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/6/2015 1:09:00 AM
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Sweet little write John.. although with a sad tinge.. Gl in contest!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 8:22:00 PM
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Thanks Dr Sharma I've been dancing on the edge of melancholy lately.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/5/2015 9:53:00 PM
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Love your title, John. wink
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 8:20:00 PM
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Lin, I have always loved to play with words.

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