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Snow In the Bible Belt

Serendipitous trippy flakes, when it snows in Georgia; forecast bleak, cancelled week - not a dent in Minnesota, but here in the bible belt angels shake their fists full of gentle flurries. They surround the stately trees and remind the pines of Christmas past - January’s our month to shine. Blizzard? White out? Banks of snow? of course not! This is the South - we lack plows. We might hazard a walk down the street, the lovely white coat of fresh paint under feet, but for yours truly, I need deer’s feet to climb down and up my hill - balding boots will not do. Flurries a little fuller, twirling, dancing, romancing. Precious these times - even a robin’s adorned in an imitation white mink coat, lilting hallelujahs on this holy morning. 1/16/2022

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Date: 1/17/2022 8:00:00 PM
I loved the creative journey of a rare snow day viewed through your eyes, Kim! You have such a unique way with your words..love this! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura!
Date: 1/17/2022 8:33:00 AM
Wow! Kim, You have penned such a well-written descriptive write. Well done -Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 1/16/2022 7:46:00 PM
Here's to deer's feet midst the flurries.... These days it seems that no place is immune from rain, snow, drought, wildfires, tsunamis -- you name it. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 6:03:00 AM
Right? There’s a lot going on out there!
Date: 1/16/2022 3:30:00 PM
Hi Kim, I loved your poem. A lot of cute phases had me smiling. This was my favorite ( Serendipitous trippy flake). It's starting to snow here in West Virginia. Enjoy your night. Blessings Debra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 7:33:00 PM
West Virginia is so beautiful and so it must be with snow! Have a wonderful and cozy night! Blessings!
Date: 1/16/2022 11:49:00 AM
So much imagery with a glimpse of the south. If I had to live in US it would be very much down. It's not so cold here. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 12:17:00 PM
We at least have some seasons and not too much snow.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 12:11:00 PM
We at least have some seasons and not too much snow.
Date: 1/16/2022 9:32:00 AM
Nice writing, Kim! I loved the way you structured your poem, an excellent example of Free Verse. Stay safe!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Milton! :)
Date: 1/16/2022 8:34:00 AM
WOW! You shine my friend in exquisite descriptions:...remind the pines of Christmas past---This is the South - we lack plows---I need deer’s feet to climb down and up my hill. Words that paint images!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 9:24:00 AM
That means a lot coming from the master of imagery. Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 1/16/2022 8:20:00 AM
Bet it looks like a winter wonderland Kim, best viewed from indoors. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 9:25:00 AM
I don’t find the need to venture out! Experienced in Minnesota with more snow than this. However if we have a great snowfall might take a walk because it would be beautiful. I have hiking boots with good treads. Thanks, my friend!

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