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Snow Fantasy or Christmas Nostalgia Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Constance La France

Snow Fantasy

"The pen must go where the pen wants to go. Today, my pen will go to a Snow Fantasy write as I sit and watch." By Poet


Look at all the white fluffy snow,
I see Birdie the old black crow. 

            Mommy can I go out and play,
            get coat and hat it is a cold day.
            Wearing my coat and hat of gray, 
            with my toys I am on my way.

     Let's build a real big snowman,
     he will be tall and fat that is the plan.
     The cold day will give him a long lifespan,
     carrot nose, coal eyes, a hat from Ann.

                  Covered in white snow head to toe,
                  to warm up inside we will go.
                  Hot chocolate and cookies will flow,
                  It is nap time from the fun cold show,
                  dreaming of the fluffy white snow.

Frosty will be his new fun name,
The Mrs.'s will be his Christmas game.   
Beautiful Snowflake is her claim,
they will come to life is our aim. 

     A Pretty Christmas Eve Wedding,
     all will be singing and reading. 
     Mommy what a dream, I am sweating,
     will it come true like in a book we are reading?

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Christuraj Alex December 20, 2025 at 10:09 PM A beutiful dream with a beautiful question at the end "will it come true like in a book we are reading?" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2025 at 10:06 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy" write. Thank You.... Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun write/story to be, Beautifully written. Have a Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Karen Jones December 20, 2025 at 2:21 PM Back to say your jewel wins! Congratulations Paula! Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2025 at 10:04 AM Great to see you back reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy" again. Thank You.... Always great to see you here. Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun write/story to be a, jewel. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Valsa George December 19, 2025 at 11:17 PM Back to your poem with Congratulations on your win. Wish you Happy Holidays. Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2025 at 11:23 AM Great to see you back reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy" again. Thank You.... Always great to see you here. Also Thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. Have a Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2025 at 9:00 AM "2 Place"  Snow Fantasy ~ Date Written:12/2/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet..... ~~~~ Snow Fantasy or Christmas Nostalgia Poetry Contes. Sponsored by: Constance La France

Shadow Hamilton December 10, 2025 at 9:11 AM beautiful Paula such fun you had hugs Shadow Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2025 at 7:39 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to be, beautiful. My pen enjoyed writing this one from a child's view. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Joseph P. DiMino December 6, 2025 at 7:21 PM Delightful read. Another lovely work of yours that I think would make a charming illustrated children's book. Do you draw? Thank you for sharing. Paula Goldsmith December 8, 2025 at 1:45 PM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to be a, Delightful read. Guess you are right when you say, this would make a charming illustrated children's book. I draw a little. This book would not be toooooo hard to do. My problem is, I do not have the time. Maybe, I should think about it. I have a duck book, I am trying to get out. My pen enjoyed writing this one from a child's view. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

I Am Anaya December 6, 2025 at 12:22 PM Snowy times! I love the dream & hope it came true. I love the display as well as the snow fantasy! Have a nice weekend! Paula Goldsmith December 8, 2025 at 1:33 PM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. I was away for the weekend. Now I have a ton of work to do. My pen really enjoyed writing this one from my inter child. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Len Gasun December 5, 2025 at 5:14 AM Such a fantastic Christmas fantasy poem and story my dear poet friend Paula! I immensely enjoyed reading it this this evening. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck always. Hugs Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2025 at 6:48 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Also Thank You for your, Good luck always. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. My pen really enjoyed writing this one from my inter child. Hugs... Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

David Crandall December 4, 2025 at 4:26 PM a wonderful, happy Christmas snow fantasy! Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2025 at 6:50 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to be, wonderful. My pen enjoyed writing this one from a child's view. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Anne Winter December 4, 2025 at 3:46 AM Dear Paula, I really enjoyed reading this beautiful and brilliant poem :) Paula Goldsmith December 4, 2025 at 8:21 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You....  Also Thank You for your, very kind words. (beautiful and brilliant) You just make my day a very happy one. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. My pen really enjoyed writing this one from my inter child. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Victor Buhagiar December 3, 2025 at 10:44 PM I rarely use rhyme, but your poem from a young one's perspective is great. Great rhymes too. Paula Goldsmith December 4, 2025 at 8:16 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to have, Great rhymes too. I enjoy writing in the rhyme style. It does take more time/thought but fun for me. My pen enjoyed writing this one from a child's view. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Valsa George December 3, 2025 at 9:35 PM This winter scene conceived of from the angle of a child is quite entertaining. Love this beautifully rhyming poem. I am sure this is going to be a winner. All the best, dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith December 4, 2025 at 8:12 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Also thanks for your, All the best. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. My pen enjoyed writing this one as my younger inter child took off. Hahaha!!!! Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Sara Kendrick December 3, 2025 at 5:38 PM Interesting work you have penned. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K Paula Goldsmith December 4, 2025 at 8:09 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. Yes, for a contest. My pen enjoyed writing this one. My younger inter child got out. Hahaha!!! Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Karen Jones December 3, 2025 at 7:39 AM The innocence is delightful! Another jewel! Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2025 at 10:38 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Also thanks for your, kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. My pen enjoyed writing this one. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

sara Etgen-Baker December 3, 2025 at 7:11 AM Snow as seen through innocent eyes with a touch of depth. Enchanting words, hugs, SAra Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2025 at 10:34 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to have, Enchanting words. My pen enjoyed writing this one from a child's view. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Sotto Poet December 3, 2025 at 6:00 AM Paula, your poem resonates with a profound emotional essence. Composed through the eyes of innocence, imbued with wonder and enchantment! Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2025 at 10:32 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. My pen enjoyed writing this one from my inter child. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2025 at 8:18 PM Written from a child's perspective. Magical! Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2025 at 10:30 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to be, Magical. Oh yes, my inter child was at work. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Abdullah Alhemaidy December 2, 2025 at 6:02 PM Nice snow fantasy! Let your pen goes where it wants to. In this nice poem, it went right nice :-) Have a nice season lovely Paula! Best wishes & regards ~ AA Paula Goldsmith December 3, 2025 at 10:28 AM Great to see you reading/writing on my fun "Snow Fantasy." Thank You.... Glad you found my fun write/story to be a, Nice snow fantasy. My pen enjoyed writing this one. Let your pen go where it wants to go and write away.....................

Paula Goldsmith December 2, 2025 at 1:46 PM Snow Fantasy ~ Date Written:12/2/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet..... ~~~~ Snow Fantasy or Christmas Nostalgia Poetry Contes. Sponsored by: Constance La France