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Snow Day

cold, but sun’s bright season’s grand sight pure snow gleaming thrilled kids screaming snowballs soaring day’s not boring sleds are gliding grandma’s riding! snowmen makers cookie bakers cocoa mixers supper fixers great day near-gone “Good night,” all yawn December 6, 2022 placed 5th in a Brian Strand Contest

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Date: 1/29/2023 2:49:00 PM
Dear Janice, you fantastic poem captures the exuberant and cozy moments that make snow days so fun and memorable! I especially loved "sleds are gliding/grandma’s riding!" and "snowmen makers/cookie bakers" A smiling delight for the senses, imagination and heart. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/21/2023 11:46:00 AM
I can feel, smell, taste and see your poem. I wish to be a character in it. a cookie baker or a snowman maker.
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Date: 1/18/2023 10:34:00 PM
I feel this one. Its been cold, icy and full of white powder. Slipping, sliding, gliding across the asphalt here in the mile high city. Well done. Asavvy1
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Date: 12/15/2022 11:27:00 PM
A nice winter poem. Well done.
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:18:00 PM
So cute. Congrats, janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2022 8:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 12/11/2022 7:39:00 AM
Creative way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Those snow days must be fun. Congratulations. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2022 11:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 12/11/2022 7:35:00 AM
Good one Janice! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2022 11:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Date: 12/11/2022 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, dear Janice .
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2022 11:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice
Date: 12/11/2022 5:48:00 AM
Great footle. Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2022 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. Janice
Date: 12/11/2022 1:36:00 AM
What a clever footle. Love this and belated congrats on potd. I have been away months.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2022 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Karen. Janice
Date: 12/10/2022 5:45:00 PM
OoooHHH, I love this! How joyful Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/10/2022 6:06:00 PM
BJ, thank you SO much! Janice
Date: 12/7/2022 8:36:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely time! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/8/2022 5:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. I'd be the one making the cookies! Janice
Date: 12/7/2022 12:55:00 PM
cute poem with two syllable counts per line, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/8/2022 5:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. They're footles. Janice
Date: 12/7/2022 1:24:00 AM
So very beautiful ! Love your footles, Janice....
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/8/2022 5:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice
Date: 12/6/2022 5:53:00 AM
Much revelry on a beautiful snow day--as you so well convey, Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/6/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 12/6/2022 12:39:00 AM
Brr I can feel the chill Janice, prefer to watch from Inside now lol. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/6/2022 5:30:00 AM
Me too, Tom. Thanks so much. Janice
Date: 12/5/2022 11:19:00 PM
Very nice:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/6/2022 5:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo. Janice

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