Janice Canerdy Poet Footle

Snow Day

cold, but
sun’s bright

season’s
grand sight

pure snow
gleaming

thrilled kids
screaming

snowballs
soaring

day’s not
boring

sleds are
gliding

grandma’s
riding!

snowmen
makers

cookie 
bakers

cocoa 
mixers

supper 
fixers

great day
near-gone

“Good night,”
all yawn


December 6, 2022
       placed 5th in a Brian Strand Contest

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Susan Ashley January 29, 2023 at 2:49 PM Dear Janice, you fantastic poem captures the exuberant and cozy moments that make snow days so fun and memorable! I especially loved "sleds are gliding/grandma’s riding!" and "snowmen makers/cookie bakers" A smiling delight for the senses, imagination and heart. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Marikate Kingston January 21, 2023 at 11:46 AM I can feel, smell, taste and see your poem. I wish to be a character in it. a cookie baker or a snowman maker.

Jared Pickett January 18, 2023 at 10:34 PM I feel this one. Its been cold, icy and full of white powder. Slipping, sliding, gliding across the asphalt here in the mile high city. Well done. Asavvy1

Daisy Meadows December 15, 2022 at 11:27 PM A nice winter poem. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2022 at 7:18 PM So cute. Congrats, janice Janice Canerdy December 11, 2022 at 8:12 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Sara Kendrick December 11, 2022 at 7:39 AM Creative way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Those snow days must be fun. Congratulations. Sara Janice Canerdy December 11, 2022 at 11:47 AM Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Linda Alice Fowler December 11, 2022 at 7:35 AM Good one Janice! Congratulations on your win! :) Janice Canerdy December 11, 2022 at 11:48 AM Thanks so much, Linda. Janice

Valsa George December 11, 2022 at 6:23 AM Congratulations on your win, dear Janice . Janice Canerdy December 11, 2022 at 11:48 AM Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice

Christuraj Alex December 11, 2022 at 5:48 AM Great footle. Congratulations! Janice Canerdy December 11, 2022 at 11:49 AM Thanks so much, Christuraj. Janice

Karen Jones December 11, 2022 at 1:36 AM What a clever footle. Love this and belated congrats on potd. I have been away months. Janice Canerdy December 11, 2022 at 11:49 AM Thanks so much, Karen. Janice

Bj Legros Kelley December 10, 2022 at 5:45 PM OoooHHH, I love this! How joyful Janice :) Janice Canerdy December 10, 2022 at 6:06 PM BJ, thank you SO much! Janice

Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2022 at 8:36 PM Sounds like a lovely time! :) Janice Canerdy December 8, 2022 at 5:54 AM Thanks so much, Kim. I'd be the one making the cookies! Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2022 at 12:55 PM cute poem with two syllable counts per line, Janice! Janice Canerdy December 8, 2022 at 5:53 AM Thanks so much, Andrea. They're footles. Janice

Valsa George December 7, 2022 at 1:24 AM So very beautiful ! Love your footles, Janice.... Janice Canerdy December 8, 2022 at 5:53 AM Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice

Vijay Pandit December 6, 2022 at 5:53 AM Much revelry on a beautiful snow day--as you so well convey, Janice Janice Canerdy December 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

Tom Cunningham December 6, 2022 at 12:39 AM Brr I can feel the chill Janice, prefer to watch from Inside now lol. Tom Janice Canerdy December 6, 2022 at 5:30 AM Me too, Tom. Thanks so much. Janice

Joanna Daniel December 5, 2022 at 11:19 PM Very nice:) Janice Canerdy December 6, 2022 at 5:30 AM Thanks so much, Jo. Janice