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Snow-Contest

S parkly flakes drifting above, N ow turned into icy prisms, O nto hands I place my gloves, W inter is here with white rhythms. Written: November 2, 2015

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John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 4:46:00 PM

congrats Laura

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations Laura.

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 1:17:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2015 12:06:00 PM

Your white flaked rhythm leads to a worthy victory, Laura! A lovely winter offering:) Congratulations on your top placement! regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 12/10/2015 3:19:00 PM

Thank you dear friend of mine!!! You're the best! -luloo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:43:00 PM

Very wonderful write Laura.. congrats on great win!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/10/2015 11:44:00 AM

Many thanks Dr. Upma! :)-luloo *smiles*

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2015 5:45:00 PM

I like your acrostic, Laura! I like that it rhymes, too! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Lu Loo
Date: 12/10/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Kim!-*smiles* -luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/21/2015 8:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely winning entry Laura. Icy prisms...beautiful!

Lu Loo
Date: 11/21/2015 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Connie again for stopping in! :) -lu *smiles*

Lin Lane

Date: 11/21/2015 4:12:00 AM

Great rhyme and acrostic, Laura. Congratulations.

Lu Loo
Date: 11/21/2015 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Lin :) -lu

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2015 3:51:00 AM

Lovely acrostic congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 11/21/2015 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Jan, please check your SM..thanks :)-lu

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/21/2015 12:07:00 AM

How lovely Laura .. congrats on awesome win!

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 8:01:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT

Lu Loo
Date: 11/20/2015 8:51:00 PM

Thanks SKAT :)

A. Juman

Date: 11/5/2015 7:03:00 PM

wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/3/2015 5:44:00 PM

A nice acrostic poem with lovely images of snow... It will not be long before we see those white flakes falling everywhere!... Good luck in the contest, Laura!

Lu Loo
Date: 11/3/2015 8:18:00 PM

Thank you Kelly :) -LU Be blessed