Snow Birds

Thus They flee Absconding In guiltless flight On fattened feathers A pointed arrowhead Guided by some hidden force Returning to their beginnings Arcing slowly over icy peaks Circling the history of their valley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Love the last line John. Congratulations! :)
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 11:14 AM
- A lovely poem, John :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Love this! Congratulations! I feel dizzy at the heights!
Empress Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:28 AM
I can see snow birds soaring in guiltless flight arcing slowly over icy peaks! How beautiful! Flows very well! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning
Jones Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Great form and imagery.
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