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Snow Birds

Thus They flee Absconding In guiltless flight On fattened feathers A pointed arrowhead Guided by some hidden force Returning to their beginnings Arcing slowly over icy peaks Circling the history of their valley

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Date: 10/12/2023 8:09:00 AM
Love the last line John. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 11:14:00 AM
- A lovely poem, John :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:46:00 AM
Love this! Congratulations! I feel dizzy at the heights!
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:28:00 AM
I can see snow birds soaring in guiltless flight arcing slowly over icy peaks! How beautiful! Flows very well! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:59:00 PM
Great form and imagery.
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