Snow

The sky had blanketed
itself with clouds
shaking down snow
coughing ice.

For weeks the curtain
had been drawn tight
over moon luminescence
and sparkling stars

Like a chronic malevolence
the sky kept shaking
fluffy snow feathers
from pillow of clouds

My shoes are broken
my toes are wet
I am aching all over
my spine needs a rest

I have piled it on high
on the roof from the sides
my eyes can’t rest
for fear it'll collapse
 
Power lines have snapped
can’t turn on the gas
looking at the sky I ask
when will the snow end?

First Place Winner: Brian Strand-All Yours-3/1/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 6:29 AM
I know many have felt this way this winter. We were spared from the storm this time and I have another reason to thank God. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Sounds like you got a lot of snow..power lines, gas..a dangerous situation..stay safe friend..you depicted this well Frances.
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