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In the darkening sky, there's a depth one can feel My breath forms a cloud in the late evening chill My eyes search for the sign of an in-coming storm Small crystals of ice are embraced by the hills And have raced to the valley, to my own window sill Encased in a cocoon of my grandmother's quilt I step off of the porch, and sit down on the stoop I am warm while the night is so quietly still Just a small trace of gold tints the soft, leaden clouds There is neither a moon, nor a star to be found In the thrill of the cold, there are glorious flakes Of silver lace petals that fall on my face. Indented, undefined are the trails we may find When the snow falls around me, at the end of the day Erasing the tension that may pass my way Such a moment is proof, that some things are divine Designed just to soften the trials of our lives
____________________________________________________________ 11/17/15 For Contest Sponsored By Shadow Hamilton "Snow"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/25/2015 5:28:00 PM
A lovely descriptive write, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:30:00 PM
Stopping back to read your lovely snow poem again and congratulate you on your win in Shadow's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/21/2015 2:57:00 PM
Your poem is filled with the joy of the season Carrie. Just beautiful! Congratulations on your win. A top winner for me!
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Date: 11/21/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, you are always so kind with your comments !! So appreciated !
Date: 11/21/2015 3:59:00 AM
Even in the dark of your picture, the snow is beautiful. Congratulations, Carrie.
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:45:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:59:00 PM
How lovely Carrie.. congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:00:00 PM
nice
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:59:00 PM
In the stillness of the storm, we find peace that floats as softy as snow -- wrapped in love. loved your poem tonight! 7
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Date: 11/18/2015 4:09:00 PM
Such a peaceful feeling in your poem, Carrie. You have painted a beautiful picture with your love words. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:42:00 PM
Hi Carrie: A beautiful recall of the first snow. My compliments!
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:38:00 PM
Very nice image of silver lace petals. I find the silence of falling snow to be a great comfort, too, and in the end you give credit where credit is due....I didn't intend for that to rhyme.;)
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Date: 11/17/2015 11:43:00 AM
Excellent Carrie....enjoyed .....
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