Snow

snow coconut cushions blanket the land time stands still momentarily silence

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James Fraser

Date: 1/6/2011 11:04:00 AM

Many congratulations Eiken, on your win in Paula's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Eiken in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2011 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/3/2011 4:02:00 AM

Thank you everyone for the lovely words of congratulations, I am shocked and surprised that I have won something. Thank you, I feel humbled into silence:))))

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/2/2011 5:06:00 PM

Hi Eiken, Congratulations on your deserving win in Paula's "Breathe in the Silence" Contest! Enjoy! Always, Audrey

Kash Poet

Date: 1/2/2011 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations Eiken on your well deserved win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 2:38:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Eiken

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 9:50:00 PM

A lovely cinquain Eiken. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/1/2011 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on lyour winning Cinquain. Love, joyce

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/1/2011 8:33:00 PM

Beautiful take on silence. congrats. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 8:21:00 PM

Congrats Eiken on your winning poem in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. awesome... enjoy with luv this first day of 2011...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 12:34:00 AM

Very nice to imagine coconuts as cushiony!! by the way, Charles recommended your poetry to me. I always am up on New Years while hubbie sleeps the night away, so I see you have many haiku here and I will just read each one!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 12/31/2010 2:51:00 PM

Oh wow what terrific words this sounds like a winner Eiken.Thanks for your comment.Teresa

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/29/2010 1:11:00 PM

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/29/2010 12:53:00 PM

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