Snow

snow

coconut cushions

blanket the land

time stands still momentarily

silence

holidayhopeinspirationalnaturenostalgiacinquain

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James Fraser

January 6, 2011 at 11:04 AM

Many congratulations Eiken, on your win in Paula's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 5, 2011 at 10:07 AM

Congratulations on your win Eiken in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

January 3, 2011 at 3:08 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

January 3, 2011 at 4:02 AM

Thank you everyone for the lovely words of congratulations, I am shocked and surprised that I have won something. Thank you, I feel humbled into silence:))))

Audrey Haick

January 2, 2011 at 5:06 PM

Hi Eiken, Congratulations on your deserving win in Paula's "Breathe in the Silence" Contest! Enjoy! Always, Audrey

Kash Poet

January 2, 2011 at 6:54 AM

Congratulations Eiken on your well deserved win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 2, 2011 at 2:38 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Eiken

Carolyn Devonshire

January 1, 2011 at 9:50 PM

A lovely cinquain Eiken. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

January 1, 2011 at 8:59 PM

Congratulations on lyour winning Cinquain. Love, joyce

Barbara Gorelick

January 1, 2011 at 8:33 PM

Beautiful take on silence. congrats. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 1, 2011 at 8:21 PM

Congrats Eiken on your winning poem in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. awesome... enjoy with luv this first day of 2011...

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2011 at 12:34 AM

Very nice to imagine coconuts as cushiony!! by the way, Charles recommended your poetry to me. I always am up on New Years while hubbie sleeps the night away, so I see you have many haiku here and I will just read each one!