Snow

bitter biting wind ice crystals glint on fresh snow sheets stack up below Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku Poetry Contest Snow chosen theme Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Howmanysyllables.com5/7/5 12/29/22

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 4:45:00 PM

David, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse with ice cold imagery. Many blessings to you

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/6/2023 8:33:00 AM

Heya Eve, thank you for dropping by with congrats, I was delighted to get a mention, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/5/2023 9:56:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. I enjoyed your "snow" write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/5/2023 11:58:00 AM

Thank you Paula, I’m delighted with the placement, hope your back is behaving, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/4/2023 4:49:00 PM

David, nice imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/5/2023 1:37:00 AM

Thank you Tania, I’m delighted as always with any placement, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/31/2022 10:40:00 AM

Wondering if this is what you see outside of your window, because the imagery is stunning! B0l ~Anaya soupmail

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2023 11:05:00 AM

Sorry Anaya I missed your comment, No snow here, plenty of rain though, we had a brief cold spell before Christmas, nothing like the US, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/30/2022 12:18:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with your "snow" write. Now for a cup of hot coffee. Write on with Blessings.....................

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/30/2022 1:35:00 PM

Sounds good to me Paula, nothing like a hot coffee to warm the cockles of the heart, cheers David

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/30/2022 5:53:00 AM

A splendid image in every line. Beauty succinctly conveyed, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/30/2022 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, I tried to bring depth to the picture by incorporating the layers we do not see building up below, cheers David

Valsa George

Date: 12/29/2022 9:47:00 PM

So beautiful is your snowscape, dear David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/30/2022 1:56:00 AM

Heya Valsa, simple is sometimes more beautiful, less can give the impression of a harsh winter scene, cheers David

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/29/2022 5:48:00 PM

Dear David, you capture the beauty of snow with poetic finesse and bits of alliteration.. vivid and vibrant! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you. Happy new year! ~Susan

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/30/2022 1:52:00 AM

Thank you Susan, it’s a pretty bleak picture, but I’m sure the hardy wildlife are not too far away, cheers David