Snit Fit

Psychologic patterns putter past
teary temper tantrum
abruptly altering an afternoons'
magical moment
fostering feathered friends.

You yawn
in indignant imitation
of outrage only
how humorously
ennui envelops
your yelling
tantrum to trek toward
some stark stumbling
angst anchored
by bloated bile.

When will we
clamly converse, crocodile?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 10:22 AM
that is funny, good one
Kurth Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 11:05 AM
I love alliteration! Nice job here. I think I will use your last two lines the next time my husband and I are having a heated discussion! Krista
Kershaw Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Crocodiles can't converse calmly cantankerous creatures call cute conversating calamity, cuz. Alliteration always appreciated. Some sweet stuff Sweet Sue. Thanks for your kind word on my contest entry. Always, Will
Brown Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Oh My crocky. Awesome write Sue. Thank you for sharing. I wish to thank you for all your kind comments of late. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 7:21 PM
much fun! Sue! really wonderful when spoken-aloud!...such great phrasing! jimbo
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