Sneaking Away

Slowly, gently like a nomad, I slip away out the back door of midnight hours , stepping into a brilliant autumn dome. In a wet emerald park Under lit panels of a tree My guy sneaks behind me Naughty as a vagrant wing, Flinging on the grass, so free, so free. And we run into the woods, Inhaling dusk’s brightness serenaded by jay-like trills, while the child within holds this glee; oh so free, free…a laughter beguiled. Then sunrise slowly, gently flames as our play begins to end, he kisses my cheeks before our moon slips-slides into gray… a moment so free, when our innocence abides. .................... 5/26/2016 Becca Teagan’s Contest: Slipping Away *Poem inspired by aforementioned song
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed this. # 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 10:34 AM
wow, I LOVE THIS. I am such a sucker for romance. The ending is so beautiful. Congrats in the contest.
Teagan Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Nette this is such a cute poem! Congratulations on your win in my Slipping Away contest.
Parker Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 1:34 PM
total trust is freedom, to be as children the purest form of love....good luck in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Your poem is pure and filled with beautiful imagery nature provides! #7. ; )
Quigley Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Steamy. Great write!
Lalion Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Fascinating masterpiece! It has pure sweetness with a lightness of musicality to it!
Raha Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 11:14 AM
oh nette,this poem is overflowing with innocence.Marvelous work.
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Very beautiful nette...I can see it all...so lovely
Austin Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 10:51 AM
I get the idea of a waking dream slip sliding along, in and out of now. Love, daver
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