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Sneak Attack

a butterball bumblebee wandered close then stung my knee after the attack fearing I'd bite back flew away the sneak she be AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on October 19, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/21/2018 9:57:00 PM

It's about time someone put some fear in those 'butterball bumblebees.' Thanks for the "Laugh Line." (Pun intended). :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/21/2018 9:58:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/20/2018 12:14:00 AM

that's what happens when you wear flower pants. :0

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/20/2018 7:27:00 AM

A fabulous fashion tip, my friend. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Timothy.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/19/2018 1:59:00 PM

Ha! Sweet:) xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/19/2018 1:52:00 PM

:) She flew away to die, my dear. They die once they've lost their sting, but I loved the humor in this piece. Well written...I enjoyed it. Thanks for your visit to my blog. Much appreciated.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2018 4:36:00 PM

Dear Eileen, I love that you are sympathetic to the bee! LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/19/2018 12:34:00 PM

I almost thought this was a monorhyme. It felt like one, then I went back and gave it another read. So fun, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2018 4:37:00 PM

Funny it did start off as a monorhyme... Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.