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Sneak Attack

a butterball bumblebee
wandered close then stung my knee
after the attack
fearing I'd bite back
flew away the sneak she be



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on October 19, 2018

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Gershon Wolf Date: 10/21/2018 9:57:00 PM It's about time someone put some fear in those 'butterball bumblebees.' Thanks for the "Laugh Line." (Pun intended). :) gw Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/21/2018 9:58:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon.

Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/20/2018 12:14:00 AM that's what happens when you wear flower pants. :0 Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/20/2018 7:27:00 AM A fabulous fashion tip, my friend. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Timothy.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/19/2018 1:59:00 PM Ha! Sweet:) xomo Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/19/2018 4:35:00 PM Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/19/2018 1:52:00 PM :) She flew away to die, my dear. They die once they've lost their sting, but I loved the humor in this piece. Well written...I enjoyed it. Thanks for your visit to my blog. Much appreciated. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/19/2018 4:36:00 PM Dear Eileen, I love that you are sympathetic to the bee! LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/19/2018 12:34:00 PM I almost thought this was a monorhyme. It felt like one, then I went back and gave it another read. So fun, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/19/2018 4:37:00 PM Funny it did start off as a monorhyme... Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.