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Snap, Crackle and Pop

Snap, Crackle and Pop I woke up this morning loving you and it was all Marshmallow and Jalapeño Such a fine day... such a gloriously feather duster sort of day For loving you And feeling like everything is made of Christmas tinsel There's a scatter of sequins in my heart Not like stars but rather giant spotlights But they're made of trampolines and the bouncy giddy wobbly Better for the cup of coffee poings itself A delirious twang. Such Madorexable dreams I had ! Phew ! I didn't know that swimming through champagne cream could feel like that Ah, but its a splendiferous breakfast A mango monsoon of loving you A sweet lilac talcum powder of a dawn giggling behind the curtains drawn I love to hear you giggle A temptingly ticklish rock n roll An orchestrated HOLY TOMATO ! Such a finesse of total disarray Watch out honey knees I'm heading your way With a whole sloppy bowl of caramel love and I want to spill it all on your lips you'll be my replacement for cornflakes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2009 2:25:00 PM
hahahah-- replacement for cornflakes.ur makin me desperate for a guy to send me somein liek dis!Tanx for an experience
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Date: 6/10/2009 8:20:00 AM
funny and funny and funny you are quite the character my friend it made me smile and laugh and started off my afternoon thanks for the comment
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:23:00 PM
holy tomato as jim says too;-),its wonderful how you worked out this jigsaw puzzle ending with caramel love,lets snap crackle and pop---this is sweeter than caramel and marshmallows tooo---charma;-)
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:04:00 AM
This makes me so HAPPY! Going to read it again. It's joy is contagious. I need a good dream to wake up to I think : ). LOVE THIS! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/15/2009 3:17:00 AM
Totally a morning person myself, leaving the silver back (gorilla) bear to finish his hibernation and scratching rituals. Loved this piece-AA
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Date: 5/15/2009 12:42:00 AM
and all I can breathlessly say is... HOLY TOMATO indeed! :) Nice!
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