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Snake Versus Crow

SNAKE VERSUS CROW the tail rattled. with its black heart and glaring attention, the crow pecks. road burn on the underbelly as the snake slithers down to the creek. crow can occupy as sentry to my property, presently. 5/18/2018

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Date: 5/24/2018 8:07:00 AM
I'm glad the crow pecked away as the rattlesnake slithered away Kim; wonderful imagery in this awesome nature write Kim!~Che :) PS I've run into snakes here in Alabama but not a rattlesnake...yet (Gulp!) :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2018 9:02:00 AM
For sure! We had a copperhead in our driveway some years ago! Glad we don’t see these things too often!
Date: 5/21/2018 7:11:00 AM
Survival of the fittest! Life and death intertwined! Great writing dear, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Date: 5/21/2018 6:42:00 AM
A battle of the century lol...great read Kim...love and light...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, WW! LOL
Date: 5/19/2018 9:45:00 AM
GREAT imagery, Kim. Loved this short poem of yours.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2018 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 5/18/2018 8:11:00 PM
I can actually visualize both the crow and the snake slithering down to the creek.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2018 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! :)
Date: 5/18/2018 6:45:00 PM
That's smart writing! I'm familiar with rattlesnakes from my pasts and crows in my present. LOL
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2018 6:38:00 AM
Thank you, Sunlite! :)

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