Snail

Each morning without fail,
I see my little,brown-shelled snail,
Plodding along with his home on his back,
Leaving a long, tiny, silver track,
I think he likes blazing a trail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Cute one...I must agree...he's blazing a trail. In snails' lexicon, that is perfectly acceptable...lol! Good morning John!
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Thank you Kim, good morning.I love your comment, the snail world and I both appreciate it. .....kind regards.......John
Merryman Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Cute limerick, John! Love, Kim
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 4:11 AM
Thanks Kim, Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by. John
Laurie Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 8:01 PM
G'day John... watch out if that trail leads to or from your lettuce plants. I fixed 'em with fresh sawdust. Thanks again John - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 8:39 PM
Fresh sawdust, I hadn't heard of that one Lindsay. Thanks for stopping by and having a read.....kind regards----John
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