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Snail

Each morning without fail, I see my little,brown-shelled snail, Plodding along with his home on his back, Leaving a long, tiny, silver track, I think he likes blazing a trail.

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Date: 5/16/2015 8:27:00 PM
Cute one...I must agree...he's blazing a trail. In snails' lexicon, that is perfectly acceptable...lol! Good morning John!
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john williams
Date: 5/16/2015 8:59:00 PM
Thank you Kim, good morning.I love your comment, the snail world and I both appreciate it. .....kind regards.......John
Date: 5/16/2015 12:13:00 PM
Ha! That's a new definition of blazing :). Cute limerick, John
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Date: 5/16/2015 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Lyric Man, Yes I don't think he moves fast enough to be, blazing, but I'm sure he thinks he is in the snail world. Thanks for having a read......kind regards-----John
Date: 5/16/2015 12:50:00 AM
Cute limerick, John! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/16/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thanks Kim, Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by. John
Date: 5/15/2015 8:01:00 PM
G'day John... watch out if that trail leads to or from your lettuce plants. I fixed 'em with fresh sawdust. Thanks again John - Lindsay
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Date: 5/15/2015 8:39:00 PM
Fresh sawdust, I hadn't heard of that one Lindsay. Thanks for stopping by and having a read.....kind regards----John