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Poetry/Sedoka/Snack Too Yummy Mommy
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1634-007-04
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 04, 2024
For the International Contest, Search The Bus
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley

First Place

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"We were all lost, broken, and empty,
until we saw those missing kids again."

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Bus driver frantic, searching for two missing kids, who did not get off the bus ! Found them on the floor, between the last seats eating, driver, parents now happy !

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 4/22/2024 9:59:00 AM

Such a fun and creative take on the contest. Loved it! Congrats on the win!

Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2024 12:49:00 PM

Robert, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats, appreciate, Constance

Miranda Hawley

Date: 4/21/2024 3:06:00 PM

The bus driver and or the monitor did their job properly since the children were found. Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Constance La France
Date: 4/21/2024 3:49:00 PM

Miranda, thank you for the contest and my great placement, appreciate the comment and congratulation

Adna Demiri

Date: 4/20/2024 7:50:00 AM

You could literally write a book, what a Talent! Keep going, we need you in future.

Constance La France
Date: 4/21/2024 3:49:00 PM

Adna, thank you for the compliment and comment

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/6/2024 11:39:00 AM

Hello Constance, i am glad that the children were found. Love & Friendship /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2024 4:07:00 PM

Hello Constance, you are welcome. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2024 4:19:00 PM

Darlene, thank you for the comment, hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/4/2024 5:36:00 PM

Dear Constance, your brief yet powerful poem captures a moment of panic and relief with such vividness. The urgency of the bus driver's search juxtaposed with the innocence of the children enjoying their snacks creates a scene that is both heart-pounding and heartwarming. Your ability to convey a range of emotions in just a few lines is truly impressive. This is delightful and relatable slice of life. - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2024 4:20:00 PM

Daniel, thank you for the compliment and the wonderful compliment, blessings and hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/4/2024 5:17:00 PM

clever poem and clever entry for the contest. Best wishes with the contest. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2024 4:20:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, hugs