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February 8, 2025


 

Migrants on the move from violence their only possession breath-space on a smuggler’s boat secured with back-bent harvests in pretzel-bent systems weight of crates of strawberries hoisted on hell-bent backs just trying to reach Spanish-shores’-east from Moroccan beach with a camel-mystique —the seaway west of Africa a rags-wearing-flotsam grave migrants on the move from Cameroon die —or survive a militia-cocktail blend of balaclava terror jihadists and bandits with morality mills low on grist infest desert sands like scorpions bullets sharp as cactus spines and male instruments of rape piercing bones and soft tissues and psyches instruments rejecting life instruments injecting horror migrants on the move find more violence migrants pray for food-filled days wasteland-vultures and water-rats prey on prayerful fearful like they’re bleating beasts men women and children herded onto a fishing vessel— a sickly casket too small way too small for all the men women and children oh how hollow-eyed babies cling to milk-less mothers bellies stinging with hunger eyes wringing til dry human smugglers grinning pockets overflowing with high tides of gold breath-space on a smuggler’s boat their only hope though distant shores stingy with dingy castaways– lantern’s light tries to melt their fright stringy muscles straining like ropes brined-eyes blaming the night for ambush shark-teeth-waves gnashing the hull maelstrom pulses swashing whitewashing vein walls just trying to cross just holding on just trying to live but the ravaging waves— waves with a savaging swing swing the frail boat with no sail swing a grim-reaper-boat with a dead motor swing a boat to fling its human cargo into thrashing switchblade waves knifing the belly-light out of the lantern cutting rag-wearers from the boat in unholy baptize gutting skies of far-sighted stars desperate gasps for air fill spaces between slap and splash of brown hands on water a child here a baby there slipping from slippery maternal grasps uglifying their faces displaced from their breath-spaces by death roll of the merchant-serpent they ride cold lips blush blue as cyanosis-seas fill sinking lungs suspended bodies writhe in fluid ballet til surrendering in tender mercy splendor like fetuses curling in midnight amnion —non-umbilical unbiblical migrants’ drowned-mouths-open screaming silent swells wear a tin-foil facade in morning tide sea-sins forgiven with christen of lavender light on lullaby currents they ripple toward that distant island corpses tossed and turned till ropey-muscles relaxed ~d ~r ~i ~f ~t ~i ~n ~g ~ like unrolled unmoored ribbons of kelp to Spanish-shores’-east on a seraph sea bodies populate sandflats rising up from a falling tide migrants on the move even in death reaching their final destination

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Date: 2/10/2025 2:10:00 AM
Excellent poem despite the sad imagery and tales on the high seas and in reality elsewhere. God created man and pot him in an exotic garden. All of us sinned and the result is horrible. Will we ever learn? Once again, exquisite if sad poem.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/10/2025 9:34:00 AM
Dear Victor, indeed, when we sin the results are horrible. Unfortunately, humanity can't seem to rise above it. I wish kindness ruled the planet instead of misery, greed, hate and exploitation.. alas, this world will never be a Garden of Eden. Thank you for sharing your enlightened thoughts with me. Your gracious visit is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes my esteemed poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/9/2025 6:36:00 PM
There is a lot of unspeakable tragedy here that you have managed to write ( with so much heart and kindness and empathy) your metaphors are healing power. <3
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Date: 2/9/2025 6:51:00 PM
Ah, my dear poet friend, Paige, these tragedies can be so difficult and painful to acknowledge. It’s almost unfathomable but it is a reality for so many. The indifference to suffering, the exploitation of the suffering is hard to comprehend. Man’s inhumanity to man is alive and well I’m afraid. Thank you for sharing in this heartbreaking scene with me. The beauty of your empathy shines, my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/9/2025 8:25:00 AM
Susan, dear friend, dear poet Never have I seen you use your poetic voice to show the depravity of man, it hits hard. Allowing your mind to describe the scene must have been a profound emotional experience. This dark scene is outstanding in its wording but so very sad in its content
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:21:00 AM
Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, indeed this poem is very sad, heart-wrenching in content. I took my time writing this so I could highlight the hardships, evoke a visceral reaction, try to effectively capture the misery of migrants who are in dire circumstances.. it's almost unconceivable to imagine but reality makes this all too real for far too many migrants on the move from war, poverty and famine. I have written about the depravity of man before.. may I direct you to my poems Escape Of The Bluesman's Song (about Southern slavery) and An Omen of the Taste of Twilight (about the genocide of Native Americans and extermination of wolves as the western frontier expanded). Thank you for sharing in this poem with me, your thoughts are treasured, your shining friendship truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/9/2025 7:07:00 AM
Talk about gut-wrenching / WOW, Susan! Spectacular rendition of an all too familiar tragedy on the high seas. Your imagery, imagination and display of electrifying emotions are beyond reproach and quite simply - untouchable by all others. Bravo again dear lady of poetic performance. Kudos, Terrell
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/9/2025 9:54:00 AM
Dear Terrell, thank you for sharing in the emotions and imagery of this poem with me. To know that many people endure desperate hardships to escape violence, war and famine is truly heart-wrenching. To feel compelled to leave one's homeland and suffer exploitation, more violence, more hunger, disability and death only speaks to the terrible conditions one faced at home. Those without a stable homeland and government are truly lost and bereft. Your thoughts are treasured and the beauty of your empathy shines. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/9/2025 6:07:00 AM
Oh boy. Since my contest I've been exposed to these graphic tales of terror and they are gut punchers. This one no exception. The grim reaper boat, sea water filling the lungs, splashing, thrashing, only making it to the promised land as corpses. What a world we live in. Huge fave on this
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/9/2025 9:44:00 AM
Dear Tom, see what you started?! Lol! I had been working on this poem for a while and just had to illustrate the inhumane horrifying way ordinary people seeking an ordinary way of life are marginalized, unfortunately politicized, capitalized (on) and victimized. Those without a stable homeland are truly lost and bereft. I treasure your thoughts and I am honored by your fave. Thank you for sharing in this scene with me. Warmest wishes my inspiring poet friend.. ~Suze P.S. Big thanks for the recommendation to our poet friend Terrell :)
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Date: 2/9/2025 9:29:00 AM
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Terrell Martin
Date: 2/9/2025 7:10:00 AM
Thanks for the recommendation to stop be here and check out Susan's "Latest & greatest." Neither she nor you have disappointed (as usual). /// Terrell
Date: 2/9/2025 12:37:00 AM
It's so sad Susan, I can't even express in words the devastation. You've done so well telling the stories they endure, and those not so lucky. You've reminded me that this is a world matter and not just in the States. Faving and keeping close to my heart. Stay warm my poetess. Friend ~ Anaya
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/9/2025 9:23:00 AM
Dear Anaya, my soulful poet friend, indeed you're correct, this is a "world matter and not just in the States." I chose to show that migrants around the world are facing similar dire situations and tragic outcomes. Unfortunately, many governments around the world treat migrants like pariahs and sadly they suffer a sad fate for just wanting safety, work, food and comfort from war, violence and famine... what any and every human wants. The beauty of your empathy shines my sweet friend. Thank you for the honor of your thoughts and fav! You are held in my truest appreciation. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/8/2025 10:10:00 PM
So tragic Susan, most are fleeing from wars and conflicts and just want a safe and better life for their families. Smugglers charge extortionate prices often overcrowding boats that are not seaworthy and many journeys end in tragedy. Powerful writing Susan. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/9/2025 9:04:00 AM
Dear Tom, thank you for your heartfelt comments about the plight of migrants on the move. The beauty of your empathy shines from a tender heart and soul. Its a dangerous, inhumane world, especially for those who are powerless, homeless, voiceless and ultimately deemed worthless by so many societies around the globe except for how migrants can be exploited. I treasure your thoughts, my poet friend. Warmest wishes for a happy weekend.. ~Susan

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